Topic: Victim of Love
fineststar's photo
Mon 02/19/07 05:53 PM
Chance occurences caused our paths to meet
Boundaries of depth longing to greet
Vision of promise without hesitation
Longing for shelter a new destination
Victim of love forgives and forgets
Memories of past and those as of yet

LAMom's photo
Mon 02/19/07 05:54 PM
Fineststar That was really nice & Welcome to JSH
Hope you post more.. flowerforyou

karmafury's photo
Mon 02/19/07 06:50 PM
Finestar that was wonderful. Welcome to JSH and please continue writing.

creationsfire's photo
Mon 02/19/07 07:04 PM
I love peoems like yours, amke me think and remember...welcome

creationsfire's photo
Mon 02/19/07 07:05 PM
but apparently I can't spell right now.....laugh

Welcome againbigsmile

no photo
Mon 02/19/07 07:18 PM
Very nice fineststar i like that hope to see more flowerforyou

Cybear's photo
Mon 02/19/07 07:51 PM
Welcome to JSH,FS.A very nice poem.We hope to hear more from you in the
future.Just mix and mingle and get to know us.Godspeed!Cybear
:smile: flowerforyou

fineststar's photo
Tue 02/20/07 03:09 PM
Thank you all for your nice comments. Writing has always been one of my
passions.

Laura

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 02/20/07 04:42 PM
Very good girl and welcome to the site hope to see
you post more bigsmile

michael1313's photo
Tue 02/20/07 04:47 PM
Nice words Finest...

Welcome to j.s.h.


nice poemflowerforyou

tretia's photo
Wed 02/21/07 07:41 AM
very pretty