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Topic: A poem
krowraven7 Joined Sun 02/18/07 Posts: 1009	Mon 02/19/07 08:16 AM
At one time I was the rug you laid on..the chair you sat the bed you rested... now I am a house plant.. watching the air and the bugs why.. the why of why

marilyn Joined Sat 01/20/07 Posts: 789	Mon 02/19/07 08:22 AM
That is very sad,good though things will get better with time

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Mon 02/19/07 08:31 AM
good poem... sometimes I feel like a mushroom

bliss420 Joined Thu 08/24/06 Posts: 143	Mon 02/19/07 08:35 AM
i like that so what do u do if u feel like a shadow in sum1s life

DANE1973 Joined Sat 12/23/06 Posts: 2136	Mon 02/19/07 08:46 AM
Very good Krowrwaven. I know what you mean.

Earthkeeper Joined Mon 09/25/06 Posts: 1	Mon 02/19/07 08:48 AM
I have had these exact feelings. You really have a gift!

krowraven7 Joined Sun 02/18/07 Posts: 1009	Mon 02/19/07 10:28 AM
poemA-depression The white is all I see but words flood my eyes when I want to see all the more- maybe the alligator can sum up my teeth thoughts in a bucket for your hand to pick up and dump ..It is the sinking of things that puts me in a chair the in-activity the vacuum the invisible -ness thru a crowd a desert a crow sits wondering how it became a crow I too wonder.. how I am all I am and nothing too

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Mon 02/19/07 10:45 AM
Dam...another good one, you have a great style to your art,your poems keep up the good work Newbee...Sir Raven Nice work

spay Joined Wed 09/27/06 Posts: 3674	Mon 02/19/07 11:34 AM
THATS SOME GOOD WORK !

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 02/19/07 12:00 PM
Really nice work Krow --

krowraven7 Joined Sun 02/18/07 Posts: 1009	Mon 02/19/07 12:10 PM
thank you all...

karmafury Joined Sun 11/12/06 Posts: 10156	Mon 02/19/07 12:26 PM
Very good pieces. Keep them coming.

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