Topic: Shamless Comes Too Easy
brwnkimba's photo
Tue 06/03/08 03:40 AM
So mislead
never know when it’s
your time
Justify and weigh your truth against the catalog of lies.
No surprise when the right way you can’t find.
Substance lost, on by tranquility and time flies.
Soon the madness willing you’ll surpass stagnation.
Self-evaluation no longer estranged from personal elevation.
Plausible though incredulous the heart speaks
long before the mouth utters a resonance.
Yet when the sound is revealed often it lacks the knowledge to
be profound.
This is to be expected when there is habitual petulance.
Land is tilled, revealed are the fruits labor earned bountiful year around.
Brazen some are to claim salvation under guise of saint.
Stand tall does this charm filled narration of lies.
Shameless comes too easy for wicked souls with twisted fates.
Aimless crumbs tease me with boring tones insipidly dry.

wildsideof35's photo
Tue 06/03/08 03:40 AM
:heart: :heart: :heart: flowerforyou flowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 06/03/08 03:41 AM
flowerforyou awesomeflowerforyou

pkh's photo
Tue 06/03/08 03:44 AM
good write as alwaysflowerforyou

brwnkimba's photo
Tue 06/03/08 09:31 AM
Thank you Wildside, MirrorMirror,and Pkh:heart:

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 06/03/08 10:56 AM
You sound a bit dark and jaded today my friend... hope all is well with you!

Wonderfully written as always!flowerforyou

brwnkimba's photo
Tue 06/03/08 01:03 PM
You read me well LSis