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Enya Joined Mon 11/26/07 Posts: 2077	Mon 06/02/08 07:16 PM
She cries all day In my heart,I feel bad. But,I show anger. I can't stand the wimpers... It bothers me so... Her sadness comes from my son, Her love. I understand her missing him... I miss him too. But,he needs to grow up... Support himself. Am I wrong? I do not cry. I'm proud of him. Yet, she cries.....

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Mon 06/02/08 07:19 PM
Very nice, but sad (((Enya)))!!

calmguy3 Joined Fri 05/23/08 Posts: 393	Mon 06/02/08 08:28 PM Edited by calmguy3 on Mon 06/02/08 08:29 PM
Torn between Motherly Love & Tuff Love Like acrobats performing feats of balance on a tightrope. Leaning to far in any one direction can have dire Consequences Great Write!

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Mon 06/02/08 08:49 PM
She cries all day In my heart,I feel bad. But,I show anger. I can't stand the wimpers... It bothers me so... Her sadness comes from my son, Her love. I understand her missing him... I miss him too. But,he needs to grow up... Support himself. Am I wrong? I do not cry. I'm proud of him. Yet, she cries..... Perhaps she cries, for she knows he is right. She is mourning, her loss.

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Mon 06/02/08 08:52 PM
She cries all day In my heart,I feel bad. But,I show anger. I can't stand the wimpers... It bothers me so... Her sadness comes from my son, Her love. I understand her missing him... I miss him too. But,he needs to grow up... Support himself. Am I wrong? I do not cry. I'm proud of him. Yet, she cries..... Anger is part of mourning Mourning allows growth

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