Topic: look upon your eyes | |
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I look into a sunset,and see your lonely eyes,
looking for your love,within your cloudy skies, I walk along a beach,the foot prints you left there, everywhere you went,I saw you really care, Holding little shells,within your loving hand, leaving me a trail,to find you in the sand, following it all day,and well into the night, I came around a bend,and saw your firelight, The silent camp was empty,except you dancing there, your silent dance entranced me,swishing wild hair, watching from a distance,wishing I were there, dancing with you quietly,showing that I care, I look into your lonely eyes,and see the setting sun, the look upon your face,lets me know that I'm th One, when you look upon my eyes,do you see the starry skies, do you see the promise, of passion in my eyes, do you see the confession,of my lonely tries, will you ever look, upon my lonely skies, do you see a setting sun,when you look upon my eyes? |
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Very nice piece Mike.
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like that one michael!!!
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This is superb;Michael.I really love the rhythm also in addition to the
primary message.Beautiful work.Godspeed!Cybear. |
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Awesome ! Michael
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aNOTHER WORK OF love GOING ON INSIDE THE BODY OF "man"...GOOD
POEM, MICKY!!!!! |
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Really liked this one M very good
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thank You all for reading,and your kind words,
you inspire more poems, and light fires of hopefull becons |
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wow thats a very beautiful one michael makes me want to be on that beach
in the night air thankyou for sharing it with us |
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my pleasure
thanx for reading |
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That is a Very Nice Beach Michael, I felt the seaweed beneath my toes.
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thanx Gryphyn
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Wish i could dream like that just beautiful
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who said I was dreaming?
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another day,another dream
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Very pretty Michael.
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Thank You Venusrose
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