Topic: look upon your eyes
michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 03:42 PM
I look into a sunset,and see your lonely eyes,
looking for your love,within your cloudy skies,
I walk along a beach,the foot prints you left there,
everywhere you went,I saw you really care,

Holding little shells,within your loving hand,
leaving me a trail,to find you in the sand,
following it all day,and well into the night,
I came around a bend,and saw your firelight,

The silent camp was empty,except you dancing there,
your silent dance entranced me,swishing wild hair,
watching from a distance,wishing I were there,
dancing with you quietly,showing that I care,

I look into your lonely eyes,and see the setting sun,
the look upon your face,lets me know that I'm th One,
when you look upon my eyes,do you see the starry skies,
do you see the promise, of passion in my eyes,
do you see the confession,of my lonely tries,
will you ever look, upon my lonely skies,
do you see a setting sun,when you look upon my eyes?

karmafury's photo
Sat 02/17/07 03:45 PM
Very nice piece Mike.

Morena350's photo
Sat 02/17/07 03:53 PM
like that one michael!!!

Cybear's photo
Sat 02/17/07 03:55 PM
This is superb;Michael.I really love the rhythm also in addition to the
primary message.Beautiful work.Godspeed!Cybear.:tongue: glasses

LAMom's photo
Sat 02/17/07 04:12 PM
Awesome ! Michael
flowerforyou

no photo
Sat 02/17/07 04:19 PM
:heart: aNOTHER WORK OF love GOING ON INSIDE THE BODY OF "man"...GOOD
POEM, MICKY!!!!!:heart: drinker flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 02/17/07 04:25 PM
Really liked this one M very good flowerforyou

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 04:44 PM
thank You all for reading,and your kind words,

you inspire more poems,
and light fires of hopefull beconssmokin

missingyou0619's photo
Sat 02/17/07 04:53 PM
wow thats a very beautiful one michael makes me want to be on that beach
in the night air thankyou for sharing it with us

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 04:55 PM
my pleasureflowerforyou

thanx for reading:wink:

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 02/17/07 05:12 PM
That is a Very Nice Beach Michael, I felt the seaweed beneath my toes.

bigsmile

G

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 05:48 PM
thanx Gryphynsmokin

no photo
Sat 02/17/07 06:54 PM
Wish i could dream like that just beautiful

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 06:58 PM
who said I was dreaming?:wink: :tongue:

michael1313's photo
Sun 02/18/07 06:42 AM
another day,another dreamsmokin

venusrose's photo
Sun 02/18/07 06:44 AM
Very pretty Michael.

michael1313's photo
Sun 02/18/07 08:12 AM
Thank You Venusroseflowerforyou