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Topic: The Other Day
AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 06/02/08 11:53 AM
The other day I saw you standing there You came close, I touched your hair We walked for miles along the coast We talked of friendships kept and lost We stopped and held each other close Knowing deep is felt the most We pondered why we didn�t work So comfortable, an old worn shirt Sometimes it all happens without a clue We stood there thinking of me and you There were no words, only feeling We left it alone; we were still healing JDS 06/02/08

No1sLove Joined Wed 04/16/08 Posts: 10342	Mon 06/02/08 11:55 AM
The other day I saw you standing there You came close, I touched your hair We walked for miles along the coast We talked of friendships kept and lost We stopped and held each other close Knowing deep is felt the most We pondered why we didn�t work So comfortable, an old worn shirt Sometimes it all happens without a clue We stood there thinking of me and you There were no words, only feeling We left it alone; we were still healing JDS 06/02/08 Very sweet and sad. (((AngelLight)))

SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Mon 06/02/08 11:57 AM
That is nothing short of BEAUTIFUL!! Thank you for sharing it....

May777 Joined Wed 04/16/08 Posts: 1238	Mon 06/02/08 11:58 AM
so beautiful

Britty Joined Sat 09/08/07 Posts: 3480	Mon 06/02/08 12:03 PM


naturalstyle Joined Sat 04/26/08 Posts: 405	Mon 06/02/08 12:13 PM
The essence of what bittersweet truely is

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Mon 06/02/08 12:14 PM
Beautiful, (((Angel)))!! Very lovely write!!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 06/02/08 12:14 PM
The other day I saw you standing there You came close, I touched your hair We walked for miles along the coast We talked of friendships kept and lost We stopped and held each other close Knowing deep is felt the most We pondered why we didn�t work So comfortable, an old worn shirt Sometimes it all happens without a clue We stood there thinking of me and you There were no words, only feeling We left it alone; we were still healing JDS 06/02/08 Very sweet and sad. (((AngelLight))) Ty for the comment and the love No1s

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 06/02/08 12:17 PM
That is nothing short of BEAUTIFUL!! Thank you for sharing it.... Ty for such a lovely comment, and you're welcome SK!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 06/02/08 12:20 PM
Ty May, Britty, Natural, and Red Yes, Natural, bittersweet...

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 06/02/08 04:30 PM
It was still something that came from your heart and it was still beautiful as always.

feistybaby Joined Fri 04/25/08 Posts: 2422	Mon 06/02/08 04:38 PM
beautiful....and there is a lesson there as well

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 06/02/08 05:48 PM
beautiful....and there is a lesson there as well Ty Robert and feisty

calmguy3 Joined Fri 05/23/08 Posts: 393	Mon 06/02/08 06:45 PM
nicely done

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 06/02/08 06:50 PM
nicely done thanks calmguy.....you have some nice writes yourself

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Mon 06/02/08 09:28 PM
as a dear friend likes to say ... "love wears many dresses" ...romance is but one of them ... the love is real regardless of the garment it is cloaked in ... Beautiful Angel

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 06/02/08 09:55 PM
as a dear friend likes to say ... "love wears many dresses" ...romance is but one of them ... the love is real regardless of the garment it is cloaked in ... Beautiful Angel Very kool ArtGurl I like that...well said Thanks.

calmguy3 Joined Fri 05/23/08 Posts: 393	Mon 06/02/08 10:00 PM
as a dear friend likes to say ... "love wears many dresses" ...romance is but one of them ... the love is real regardless of the garment it is cloaked in ... Beautiful Angel Huh ooh noo noo! i'm gonna call my um dress a kilt you know one of them tartan wraparound thingy mujiggers worn by them Scottish Guys Besides if it was a dress i surely don't have the collection of shoe's it takes to make my outfit work hehe

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 06/02/08 10:02 PM
as a dear friend likes to say ... "love wears many dresses" ...romance is but one of them ... the love is real regardless of the garment it is cloaked in ... Beautiful Angel Huh ooh noo noo! i'm gonna call my um dress a kilt you know one of them tartan wraparound thingy mujiggers worn by them Scottish Guys Besides if it was a dress i surely don't have the collection of shoe's it takes to make my outfit work hehe calmguy LMAO

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Mon 06/02/08 10:08 PM
as a dear friend likes to say ... "love wears many dresses" ...romance is but one of them ... the love is real regardless of the garment it is cloaked in ... Beautiful Angel Huh ooh noo noo! i'm gonna call my um dress a kilt you know one of them tartan wraparound thingy mujiggers worn by them Scottish Guys Besides if it was a dress i surely don't have the collection of shoe's it takes to make my outfit work hehe Call it whatever makes you feel comfortable and manly calmguy ...