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Topic: Take Me To The Country
Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 06/02/08 07:05 AM
Take Me To The Country Take me to the country Where the wildflowers bloom, Where I'm close to nature Away from all this gloom. God paints a picture With its grandeur all amidst, This is one of His blessings That I wouldn't miss. Take me to the country Where the air is so fresh, Where I can see all of the birds Even the robin redbreast. The grass is lush and green The trees provide the shade, If heaven is anything like this We would have it made.

No1sLove Joined Wed 04/16/08 Posts: 10342	Mon 06/02/08 07:07 AM
That's very beautiful (((Robert)))!

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 06/02/08 07:08 AM
That's very beautiful (((Robert)))! Thank you Roe...that was just a quick thought this morning before I got off work. I had to write it really quick. Glad you liked it.

DREAMZ Joined Sat 05/31/08 Posts: 1775	Mon 06/02/08 07:11 AM
iiiiiiiiiiiiiii like it!

SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Mon 06/02/08 07:12 AM
Robert, that is very nice!! Good to see you back and at it!!!

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 06/02/08 07:13 AM
Robert, that is very nice!! Good to see you back and at it!!! Thank you Suze...it feels good to be back at it. Glad you liked it. And thanks to you Dreamz...glad you liked it also.

elwoodsully Joined Tue 05/01/07 Posts: 7477	Mon 06/02/08 07:20 AM
If I may be allowed to expand on your poetry; Take me to the country Where things just aren't that fast Where we'd get better veggies at the farmstand we just passed The people there are nicer They'll give a helping hand To any stranger lost out here in (to them) a foreign land Take me to the country Where the farmer makes our food Where men hold doors for ladies and the air smells twice as good Where going to church on Sunday still means wearing Sunday's best And relaxing over Supper is what we need for rest Take me to the country where we still stand and salute the Vets as they go marching down the long,slow parade route I'll take country over city I've done both in my time it's what the doctor ordered I've got country on my mind

Britty Joined Sat 09/08/07 Posts: 3480	Mon 06/02/08 07:21 AM
Nice poem Robert, and a nice little addition by Elwood.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 06/02/08 07:29 AM
If I may be allowed to expand on your poetry; Take me to the country Where things just aren't that fast Where we'd get better veggies at the farmstand we just passed The people there are nicer They'll give a helping hand To any stranger lost out here in (to them) a foreign land Take me to the country Where the farmer makes our food Where men hold doors for ladies and the air smells twice as good Where going to church on Sunday still means wearing Sunday's best And relaxing over Supper is what we need for rest Take me to the country where we still stand and salute the Vets as they go marching down the long,slow parade route I'll take country over city I've done both in my time it's what the doctor ordered I've got country on my mind That was pretty good Elwood...thanks for the addition. Thanks Susan, that was good wasn't it?

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Mon 06/02/08 07:29 AM
Very nice write, (((Robert)))!!

elwoodsully Joined Tue 05/01/07 Posts: 7477	Mon 06/02/08 07:32 AM
Wolf, if it weren't for you, I wouldn't have thought of it. tips his hat to Wolf

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 06/02/08 07:33 AM
Very nice write, (((Robert)))!! Thank you Erica...glad you liked it.

bgeorge Joined Fri 09/14/07 Posts: 7850	Mon 06/02/08 07:39 AM
i miss living in the country heya robert

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 06/02/08 07:47 AM
i miss living in the country heya robert Hiya Brenda...how have you been? Missed you. Elwood, I am glad I could get your flow going this morning. That was really a nice add.

elwoodsully Joined Tue 05/01/07 Posts: 7477	Mon 06/02/08 07:49 AM
i miss living in the country heya robert Hiya Brenda...how have you been? Missed you. Elwood, I am glad I could get your flow going this morning. That was really a nice add. My flow?? My flow is what woke me up at 5am... lol Oh, you mean poetry flow.. Well, when I see something that strikes a chord with me, it brings out the thoughts that I have already had on the subject, and it just seems to... FLOW

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 06/02/08 07:53 AM
i miss living in the country heya robert Hiya Brenda...how have you been? Missed you. Elwood, I am glad I could get your flow going this morning. That was really a nice add. My flow?? My flow is what woke me up at 5am... lol Oh, you mean poetry flow.. Well, when I see something that strikes a chord with me, it brings out the thoughts that I have already had on the subject, and it just seems to... FLOW Sorry I beat you to it...but it was a good add that had the same flow to it. Thanks

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 06/02/08 08:20 AM
Take me to the country, thats where I want to be. Out here living and breathing free. Leave me here with all of GOD friends so near. Shine my sun, let me run, never a fear. Birds flying high, in the white and blue sky. Deers to wake me from a nap, pinetrees smelling of their sap. This place I rest out in the country. Is the place I love the best. I just got inspired,,,GREAT job Robert and Sully,,,CHEERS GUYS,

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 06/02/08 04:48 PM
Take me to the country, thats where I want to be. Out here living and breathing free. Leave me here with all of GOD friends so near. Shine my sun, let me run, never a fear. Birds flying high, in the white and blue sky. Deers to wake me from a nap, pinetrees smelling of their sap. This place I rest out in the country. Is the place I love the best. I just got inspired,,,GREAT job Robert and Sully,,,CHEERS GUYS, Good job Terry for your addition to it...I think everybody is getting into the flow of this one. Help yourselves.

calmguy3 Joined Fri 05/23/08 Posts: 393	Mon 06/02/08 08:00 PM Edited by calmguy3 on Mon 06/02/08 08:07 PM
If I may be allowed to expand on your poetry; Take me to the country Where things just aren't that fast Where we'd get better veggies at the farmstand we just passed The people there are nicer They'll give a helping hand To any stranger lost out here in (to them) a foreign land Take me to the country Where the farmer makes our food Where men hold doors for ladies and the air smells twice as good Where going to church on Sunday still means wearing Sunday's best And relaxing over Supper is what we need for rest Take me to the country where we still stand and salute the Vets as they go marching down the long,slow parade route I'll take country over city I've done both in my time it's what the doctor ordered I've got country on my mind A nice add on indeed

calmguy3 Joined Fri 05/23/08 Posts: 393	Mon 06/02/08 08:06 PM
Take me to the country, thats where I want to be. Out here living and breathing free. Leave me here with all of GOD friends so near. Shine my sun, let me run, never a fear. Birds flying high, in the white and blue sky. Deers to wake me from a nap, pinetrees smelling of their sap. This place I rest out in the country. Is the place I love the best. I just got inspired,,,GREAT job Robert and Sully,,,CHEERS GUYS, Good job Terry for your addition to it...I think everybody is getting into the flow of this one. Help yourselves. The Flow is flowin like a river in a country. Man this is gettin good.