Topic: In the Night
sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 02/17/07 08:48 AM
The alpha within, yearning to get out
she is free at night to run with the moon
but in the day, in the light so bright
just another dream losing the fight
She's strong and leads her pack
good intentions always intact
but the night brings sadness
lonliness is her plight
'cause there is none that can help
her win her fight...
In her heart she holds on tight
to the dream of a mate
that can grasp and keep her right
'till then, she fights and bites
all who come near
cause trust is naught
Her cubs to think of
to nurture and culture
it'll take just the right one
but there is no perfection of virtue
So in this hunt, I'll continue to roam
hoping it wont be long this path to comb
just to "feel" and keep
the wheels of fate turning
and stop all this yearning...


Inspired by a true friend that keeps to the shadows...

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 09:02 AM
WoW!
that was nice SCG!flowerforyou

so glad to see your writing againsmokin

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 02/17/07 09:11 AM
Thank You M...flowerforyou :heart: blushing

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 02/17/07 09:16 AM
Aww good one girl hummm ya been doing some hunting there lol.bigsmile

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Sat 02/17/07 09:25 AM


Sweet

karmafury's photo
Sat 02/17/07 09:41 AM
That was Awesome SCG.

Cybear's photo
Sat 02/17/07 09:44 AM
OMG!SCG;this is incredibly powerful and moving.It is grasping hope
itself and holding it lovingly in the palms of your hands,knowing and
believing that your soul mate and yourself will find each other one
glorious day leaving loneliness behind forever.I luv this very much and
then some period.Your Bearific Friend,Cybear.
:tongue: flowerforyou smooched blushing embarassed

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 02/17/07 09:47 AM
Very Beautiful, I have always enjoyed your writing. It is truly from a
soul who deserves nothing but the best in Life.

flowerforyou flowerforyou bigsmile

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sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 02/17/07 10:09 AM
Thank you Karma...flowerforyou

Thanks Txs...as always!:wink:

JJ..appreciate you reading too...happy

Gryphn...TY!!!! blushing

Cybear...Thanks once again...:heart: blushing :heart: blushing

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Sat 02/17/07 10:15 AM
flowerforyou I got it,,,,I know who told you this story...
It was some certain cybears better bear half, LOL. just kidding.
Your poem here is with the wild beast of emotion running inside you and
always protecting...good-one SWEET....flowerforyou

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 02/17/07 10:24 AM
Thanks Iam...
(SHHHHH, don't tell,:wink:)
Your words of encouragement are so kind and true...and right on
target... :heart: )