Topic: Another Day
michael1313's photo
Fri 02/16/07 11:51 PM
Another day goes passing by,
I often sit,to wonder why,
thinking of th' days gone by,
dreaming of doves upon th sky,
looking into loves sunset eye,
longing for another try,
hurting by another cry,
watching time,just flying high,
another day goes passing by,
alone I sit,and wonder why,
another teardrop from my eye,
another year drops from my try,
lonely days go passing by,
lonely days and guessing why,

Only hopes of dreaming nights,
dancing 'round my firelights,
Special one in my dream flights,
dancing 'round my dreaming nights,

Another day goes passing by,
looking up into my blue sky,
longing for my passions try,
loving in her passions cry,
loving,never asking why,
dreaming for another try,
waking up alone I cry,
I often sit,and wonder why,
another day goes passing by...
Lonely Soulsmokin

SouthernDoll29's photo
Sat 02/17/07 12:35 AM
Thats beutiful Michael, why would you be lonely with those beautiful
words that you say,great job keep it up!! Later,Rose

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 12:37 AM
Thank You SouthernDoll...

why I'm lonely?

nobody here to tell these words to...smokin

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 01:17 AM
feelin' th blues,so I wrote this onesmokin
listenin to B.B.King & Eric Clapton

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 01:43 AM
love that slow guitar:wink:

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 07:25 AM
and yet,another day passes bysmokin

Cybear's photo
Sat 02/17/07 09:05 AM
Very sad and true,but once again beautiful Michael.It feels more like a
perpetual haunting.However I truly believe deep down in my heart that
the day will come for you that will forever change this relentless,
restless journey that life has left you adrift within.I believe that all
circumstances and events are subject to change within anyone's
life.Through God's strength and guidance then may he bring your soul
mate within your grasp to capture forever bringing the end to two lonely
souls.Godspeed!Cybear:smile:flowerforyou

karmafury's photo
Sat 02/17/07 09:46 AM
Sad and well written Mike.

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 09:47 AM
Thank You Cybear...
your kind words of hope have touched me,
and brought a tear to my lonely eyes...

Thanx for readingsmokin

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 11:20 AM
bump for friendssmokin

no photo
Sat 02/17/07 11:33 AM
Awesome poem Michael! smooched Remember that you're in my thoughts
everyday! :smile:

no photo
Sat 02/17/07 11:35 AM
Micky, Great words as you always do and have for us,,,so cool.
NOW my bro, grab onto one of these ladies here and NEVER let them
GO!!,Wink,wink,:heart: drinker smokin

missingyou0619's photo
Sat 02/17/07 11:39 AM
great poem michael how sad but beautiful can relate all to well
thanks for sharing it

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 02/17/07 11:47 AM
Waiting for my lonely try
Another day goes slowly by
Chanting my love into the wind
Is there no end to this cry
The doves do fly
and eagles rome in the skies
Teardrops fall as days go by
Yearning quietly for another try...


Sorry Michael...
Just how I feel today...
Please do not be offended by this tag,
(or whatever the Fuc_ ya want to call it...)

:heart: :heart: :heart:

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 02/17/07 11:49 AM
good words Mflowerforyou

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 12:53 PM
Thank You all for reading my poem,and your kind words...

and thanx for the Tag,SCGflowerforyou :heart:

you are always welcome to tag my work,
if it moves you so...smokin


unless I've asked otherwise,but you did no harm here...

Thank You :wink:

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 06:16 PM
and so another day goes into tommorrowsmokin

michael1313's photo
Sun 02/18/07 06:27 AM
I wonder,
how many days,before I'm found,
how many ways,before I belong,
how many tries,before I'm gone,
how many tears,before my sunsets...
and another day,passing by...smokin