Topic: Love is "US" @)~~~~~
brian_caledonia's photo
Fri 02/16/07 01:29 PM
Love Is “US”

Love is but,
a many splendid desire.
Walking through the sands of time,
and amongst the coals of fire.

These words of love and commitment,
scare you more than you say.
Because of getting to know you,
I know these things today.

For independence,
though safe, secure and fun.
Is just another word for “lonely”,
spending it with no special “one”.

I want you whole heartedly,
with nothing to be held back.
It seems we are getting there,
I think on the right track.

I will give you all the same,
and offer you my love and heart.
After hearing your sweet voice,
that choice is an easy part.

As we learn about each other,
and our love continues to blossom and grow.
You mean the world to me,
I just wanted you to know.

For when you’re with,
the one you hold true.
Nothing can hold you back,
there’s nothing you can’t go through.

Together we will be strong,
entwined in a loving embrace.
Oblivious to the world around,
in our own special place.

Believing in each other,
we’ll explore and experience life.
Living and loving each day,
me as your husband, you as my wife.

For love and understanding,
is what we shall share.
You are the one in my dreams,
and no one can compare.

Just so you know,
I’ve always been true.
With you I’ve loved my life,
I hope you have too.

For when our lives are through,
and we are but a thought.
We will have lived in love and happiness,
For “US" is all we sought.


Written by Brian C.

no photo
Fri 02/16/07 02:03 PM
That is so beautiful ,the one you wrote that for will trulie love it
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

michael1313's photo
Fri 02/16/07 04:12 PM
good work Briansmokin

creationsfire's photo
Fri 02/16/07 04:23 PM
Gave me goose bumps.....I like it very muchflowerforyou

Smiles,

Fire

Lil_Luvr_75's photo
Sat 02/17/07 05:49 AM
You most definetely have my full attention with all that said. It is not
often I am left speechless.:smile:

Cybear's photo
Sat 02/17/07 09:28 AM
Bearifically Beautiful!Sweet description of the journey you embark upon
with your mate.Right through the course of years meshing together as
one.Bringing together minds,hearts,souls,and spirit.Simply beautiful
work.I really enjoyed this alot Brian.Welcome to JSH;and pleased to meet
by the way.Some bomb poetry lies within the walls of the house as you
can see.Some incredibly talented Poets within the comm.Well Enjoy
then.Godspeed!Cybear.glasses

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 02/17/07 09:36 AM
Awesome poem Brian keep them flowing.flowerforyou

karmafury's photo
Sat 02/17/07 09:39 AM
Wow! Really, really good. Keep them coming.

brian_caledonia's photo
Sat 02/17/07 09:50 AM
Thank ya'll very much, you are too kind....I have a couple more I will
post tomorrow, hope you like those as much @)~~~~ Brian

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 02/17/07 09:56 AM
Nice to see you Brian, I am glad you decided to post this, it is nice to
see new people posting such nice poetry, Welcome.

drinker bigsmile

G

brian_caledonia's photo
Sat 02/17/07 10:27 AM
these poems are about a dream woman on here that I am in love with, her
id is want2ctheworld she means the world to me....tell her for me
please Brian