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Topic: Ask
StellaBellaLuna Joined Sat 01/05/08 Posts: 61	Fri 05/30/08 08:44 PM
If you asked I would take the time To tell you the deepest, darkest secrets my soul could possibly bear If you called I’d talk I’d laugh, even at the jokes That weren’t really that funny If you cried, I’d wipe your tears Before they reached the ground If you asked it of me I would be yours Before you could Ask

SimplyElla Joined Wed 02/13/08 Posts: 7124	Fri 05/30/08 08:46 PM
Ooo i like that one... very nice High 5! seriously beautifully done

boneyjoe Joined Sun 12/09/07 Posts: 6196	Fri 05/30/08 08:49 PM
yep,,,,this one is very nice

JadedHeart Joined Tue 04/22/08 Posts: 468	Fri 05/30/08 08:50 PM
Wow...very nice!

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Fri 05/30/08 08:52 PM
"i like that"

chriserwalk032786 Joined Thu 04/10/08 Posts: 105	Fri 05/30/08 08:52 PM
Nice.

yantraimages Joined Sun 12/09/07 Posts: 1078	Fri 05/30/08 08:57 PM
I'm sold, I want you to tell me your deepest darkest secrets. I'm asking.

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Fri 05/30/08 11:10 PM
Impressive! Beautifully said.

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Sat 05/31/08 04:28 AM

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