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Are Now
I have been, where you are, now, The same spot and again. Drifting, floating grabbing on, pulling, catching wind. In the night time, dusking, dark, the fire flies congregate, waiting for that little child, to fill a jar, while swinging on the gate. Sometimes it feels, the needing, just to pull the sway. Share the spot, the same one. And gift each other stay. Raine Les 5/30/2008 |
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How beautiful!
Did you read "The Old Spot" before writing this? I feel like even if you didn't (go read it haha) it's like a response to a daughters monologue, a comforting, yet real, response of what is to come. Well written indeed. |
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Very nice Sharris
 
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How beautiful! Did you read "The Old Spot" before writing this? I feel like even if you didn't (go read it haha) it's like a response to a daughters monologue, a comforting, yet real, response of what is to come. Well written indeed. did you read yours? It was in response. There are so many beautiful ways to reveal the heart..isn't there. |
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How beautiful! Did you read "The Old Spot" before writing this? I feel like even if you didn't (go read it haha) it's like a response to a daughters monologue, a comforting, yet real, response of what is to come. Well written indeed. did you read yours? It was in response. There are so many beautiful ways to reveal the heart..isn't there. Haha, I'm sorry- I saw that afterward and I was like, Oh jeez I look like a dork. What a beautiful response! I really enjoy your style |
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