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As the night falls on the fading sun
The light from a love begins to fade So much sorrow lurking in the dark So much dissapointment a heart can take The once bright, clear future for them both Now overshadowed by uncertainty of things that can't be controlled Even thou the love is strong A soul can only cry for so long If it's his destiny to be the destructor of man Then her destiny must be to walk the heavens alone For her love can only hold him for so long For her love, she thought, made him whole and strong So she cries in the night Under a dark starlit sky Letting the tears fall down on earth Letting the sorrow drown with the love she holds in her heart. Marina. |
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a kind romantic soul with passion
peace jimmy |
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Thanks Jimz
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i hope her cries are don't go un-noticed
nice write Mar |
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I fill the same . WL whitebull.
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Edited by
lizethmarina
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Mon 06/30/08 08:09 AM
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Thanks KC, her cries didn't go unnoticed
Thanks Alan (WB) |
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you should right more thay are good.
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Nice write
Long time no see, Welcome back! |
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very nice
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tender pull
a sad weave. beautiful, I have not met you before, seen your name. nice to meet you, Sadie |
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