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lizethmarina's photo
Tue 05/27/08 12:58 PM
As the night falls on the fading sun
The light from a love begins to fade
So much sorrow lurking in the dark
So much dissapointment a heart can take

The once bright, clear future for them both
Now overshadowed by uncertainty of things that can't be controlled
Even thou the love is strong
A soul can only cry for so long

If it's his destiny to be the destructor of man
Then her destiny must be to walk the heavens alone
For her love can only hold him for so long
For her love, she thought, made him whole and strong

So she cries in the night
Under a dark starlit sky
Letting the tears fall down on earth
Letting the sorrow drown with the love she holds in her heart.

Marina.
:cry: brokenheart :cry:


jimz's photo
Tue 05/27/08 01:32 PM
flowerforyou a kind romantic soul with passion

peace
jimmy

lizethmarina's photo
Wed 05/28/08 10:54 AM
Thanks Jimz flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Wed 05/28/08 10:57 AM
i hope her cries are don't go un-noticed

nice write Mar

flowerforyou flowerforyou

Whitebull's photo
Sun 06/29/08 02:11 PM
:cry: I fill the same . WL whitebull.

lizethmarina's photo
Mon 06/30/08 08:09 AM
Edited by lizethmarina on Mon 06/30/08 08:09 AM
Thanks KC, her cries didn't go unnoticed flowerforyou

Thanks Alan (WB) flowerforyou

Whitebull's photo
Thu 12/31/09 10:40 PM
you should right more thay are good.:smile:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 01/01/10 03:51 PM
Nice write flowers
Long time no see, Welcome back!

brwnkimba's photo
Sun 01/03/10 07:59 AM
flowerforyou

cherie091279's photo
Sun 01/03/10 08:02 AM
flowerforyou very nice

Sharris's photo
Sun 01/03/10 08:06 AM
tender pull
a sad weave.
beautiful,
I have not met you before, seen your name.
nice to meet you,
Sadie