Topic: Heart of Stone
karmafury's photo
Tue 02/13/07 06:17 PM
Heart of Stone

Begin to care, begin to feel
Reach out,confirm connection
Words sharper than steel
Cut, pierce, slice a section

Remove that piece, take that part
Scar tissue, harder than bone
Too much gone, can't restart
No more love, heart of stone

michael1313's photo
Tue 02/13/07 06:20 PM
The nightmare of those in service...

Good poem Karmasmokin

DANE1973's photo
Tue 02/13/07 06:22 PM
Karma,I feel you brother.

Cybear's photo
Tue 02/13/07 06:29 PM
Wow!This is powerful stuff Karma.If you mind me asking;do work within
the medical profession?I'm just curious.I noticed your last couple posts
are leaning that direction.This could feed terrible nightmares
seriously.Godspeed!Cybear.glasses

no photo
Tue 02/13/07 06:30 PM
(((((Karma))))) Great work, just sad to read

karmafury's photo
Tue 02/13/07 06:48 PM
Thank you Dane, Poet.

Not service, work related Mike.

Cybear, I'm a Security Officer. The last was work related from an on
site murder. This one is more personal in nature.

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 02/13/07 06:49 PM
WOW , now that was really kewl!

LAMom's photo
Tue 02/13/07 06:50 PM
((Karma))

Cybear's photo
Tue 02/13/07 06:58 PM
I commend you my dear friend Karma.You are a man of deep
strength,fortitude and character and last but not least my
brother.Godspeed!Cybear.

greeneyedlady42's photo
Tue 02/13/07 07:06 PM
I really like this one Karma-
It is direct and very well written.
Good writing!

karmafury's photo
Wed 02/14/07 02:57 AM
Thank you ladies.

Cybear, always proud to be your brother.

Gryphyn's photo
Wed 02/14/07 03:09 AM
I missed this one apparently in the posting shuffles. Good work Karma
Those feelings at one time were far to accurate in my description.

:smile:

no photo
Thu 02/15/07 08:55 PM
IN time that heart of stone will soften again, it always does, you
cannot shut yourself off totally from the world

Gryphyn's photo
Thu 02/15/07 10:36 PM
Very True Poet, these days it is being molded by someone who has the
keys to my soul and heart. Best part of it is I love the feeling.

blushing

G

venusrose's photo
Fri 02/16/07 07:08 AM
You may have experienced a "heart of stone" but your heart will soften
again. Karma, you have a heart of gold. Well written
poem!flowerforyou