Topic: Old is new
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Sat 05/24/08 09:49 PM
Once a life lived, only to think that it could lead to this.

Once young thinking being older was the thing, now is seen as the opposite thing.

Once known friends for who they were, now its for what they are.

Once thought life was cheerful everyday, now it seems it becomes dearful each tear that drops.

Once not knowing what love was, only came to conclude what a heartbreak was.

Once i thought i could fly into endless possibilities, now it seems possibilities run through my everyday life.

Once i knew that i was dearly loved by all, now it seems i must fight for this earned right that isnt given freely.

Once the night came to consume my ever lasting drought. But, i then came out to embolish the nights might.

Once consumed by hatred led to a broken statment, lust less, love more. hence is when i saw the gates of faith.

Once you said you loved me, but you were going to break my heart, you said you would love me forever..

So why are we apart? if you really meant forever, then say you will try, cuase once you said forever..

And it made me cry.


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Sat 05/24/08 09:52 PM
sweet n truebrokenheart

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Sat 05/24/08 09:53 PM
thx, i write poetry when am "in the mood"

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Mon 05/26/08 05:14 PM
Awesome poem, I know what you mean when in the mood to write a poem. The only thing is I am still working on a poem when in the mood. You did great!