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Topic: Live in the moment
DANE1973 Joined Sat 12/23/06 Posts: 2136	Mon 02/12/07 09:07 AM
I can feel your embrace, Hold me tightly Darling, Hold me until the pain Subsides, Into the early hours of morning, Let me lose myself, In the softness of your eyes, To feel the warmth of your lips, With your body pressed against me, Let our souls become as one, We soar ever higher, I will forever tremble, In your arms, To your softest touch, Even though you are far from me, I feel your heart beat still.

ChubbyCherubPoet Joined Fri 10/06/06 Posts: 23222	Mon 02/12/07 09:10 AM
Simply beautiful Dane...nothing more can be said

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 02/12/07 09:17 AM
Dane, Really Beautiful

venusrose Joined Fri 09/15/06 Posts: 575	Mon 02/12/07 09:17 AM
I agree, beautiful!

DANE1973 Joined Sat 12/23/06 Posts: 2136	Mon 02/12/07 09:21 AM
Ty ladies it came from the heart.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Mon 02/12/07 09:21 AM
Awesome words of passion.

jenn_82 Joined Thu 12/07/06 Posts: 1407	Mon 02/12/07 09:22 AM
sounds great

DANE1973 Joined Sat 12/23/06 Posts: 2136	Mon 02/12/07 09:34 AM
Give it a try Jenn?

whispertoascream Joined Fri 11/17/06 Posts: 22844	Mon 02/12/07 02:24 PM
Very passionate. Wonderfully written.

karenbear Joined Thu 02/01/07 Posts: 15	Mon 02/12/07 07:56 PM
I love this pome I can tell it comes from your heart

DANE1973 Joined Sat 12/23/06 Posts: 2136	Mon 02/12/07 08:00 PM
Thanks to all of you it means a lot to me that they touch you all.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 02/12/07 08:10 PM
You have alot of heart.. Great words..

catchme_ifucan Joined Fri 11/03/06 Posts: 24221	Mon 02/12/07 08:13 PM
kewl!

DANE1973 Joined Sat 12/23/06 Posts: 2136	Mon 02/12/07 08:30 PM
Thank you Catch and Lamom, And thank you both for your kind words.I love you both my friends.(((hugs)))

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