Topic: Just getting some outside perspective
Jdcva's photo
Tue 05/20/08 06:38 AM
What do you think? Too many runons? Too heavy? Too direct? Please be nice but honest.blushing

lilith401's photo
Tue 05/20/08 06:42 AM
I thought it was great. Very good job. Kudos to you!

However, your single pic needs friends. Sunglasses, especially reflective ones, hide your eyes. We ladies want to see them! Find a variety of pics and post them up. flowerforyou

Jdcva's photo
Tue 05/20/08 06:44 AM
Thank you for the feedback and good morning.

lilith401's photo
Tue 05/20/08 06:44 AM
Good morning to you as well.

rzepkow1's photo
Tue 05/20/08 06:51 AM
I would agree, another picture without the glasses and perhaos a smile might be nice as well!

rzepkow1's photo
Tue 05/20/08 06:52 AM
*perhaps! HATE those darn typos!#$@)(*&^%#$!(*&)(* !!!

lilith401's photo
Tue 05/20/08 06:55 AM

*perhaps! HATE those darn typos!#$@)(*&^%#$!(*&)(* !!!


You can go back to your original post and click edit... :wink:

Jdcva's photo
Tue 05/20/08 07:00 AM

I would agree, another picture without the glasses and perhaos a smile might be nice as well!



True I call that picture traffic face...laughing.

rzepkow1's photo
Tue 05/20/08 07:00 AM
Thanks for the tip, new to this as you could tell!:wink:

rzepkow1's photo
Tue 05/20/08 07:01 AM
laugh
Says it all doesn't it!