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Topic: The Story of Me
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Mon 05/19/08 06:54 AM
My daddy once told me
Honey
Don’t ever think
You can write the script
Because even the
Sweetest of love stories
Can turn into
The worst
of melodramas
once a line
has been
ad libbed …

Just when the
stage is set …
All the players
are in place
and the
dialogue
so lovingly
well crafted
is about to
be spoken …
A surprise
character
will steal
the scene
and send
your story
Shifting
Rapidly
Frighteningly
and Painfully
into a
whole
new
genre
and
direction …

Oh Daddy …
When did
my Oscar award
winning life
turn into
such a cheap
and tawdry
soap opera?
Is it
too late
to get
another
screen writer
and save
The Story
… of Me??





AngelLight's photo
Mon 05/19/08 07:05 AM
No, write your own story darlin' flowerforyou :smile:

It is yours, and yours alone :heart:

no photo
Mon 05/19/08 07:06 AM

No, write your own story darlin' flowerforyou :smile:

It is yours, and yours alone :heart:


apparently...i'm not much of a writer.....

AngelLight's photo
Mon 05/19/08 07:10 AM


No, write your own story darlin' flowerforyou :smile:

It is yours, and yours alone :heart:


apparently...i'm not much of a writer.....


I think you are a great writer, IMO flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Mon 05/19/08 07:13 AM


No, write your own story darlin' flowerforyou :smile:

It is yours, and yours alone :heart:


apparently...i'm not much of a writer.....


Your Canvas is set,, Rainbows flow from pen to paper
The Soul tells a story,, I sit in awe of the Women
I've come to know,, You are my Muse,, My calm in the
night,, I toast you dear lady,, From my heart to yours
My home to yours,, My Soul to yours,,

My Love,,,, :heart: flowerforyou

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Mon 05/19/08 07:19 AM



No, write your own story darlin' flowerforyou :smile:

It is yours, and yours alone :heart:


apparently...i'm not much of a writer.....


I think you are a great writer, IMO flowerforyou


:heart:

no photo
Mon 05/19/08 07:19 AM



No, write your own story darlin' flowerforyou :smile:

It is yours, and yours alone :heart:


apparently...i'm not much of a writer.....


Your Canvas is set,, Rainbows flow from pen to paper
The Soul tells a story,, I sit in awe of the Women
I've come to know,, You are my Muse,, My calm in the
night,, I toast you dear lady,, From my heart to yours
My home to yours,, My Soul to yours,,

My Love,,,, :heart: flowerforyou


Mahalo dear heart...:heart:

LAMom's photo
Mon 05/19/08 07:20 AM
Aloha au ia 'oe :heart:

s1owhand's photo
Mon 05/19/08 07:38 AM
flowerforyou

the play has not concluded
yet the lights are dimmed
piano accompaniment
as the scene is deftly changed

watch the mood shift
the darkness slowly lifts
overheard in an adjoining room
mystery unfolds off stage

where actors dramatically
reconstruct
directions and dialog
this is really life

:heart:


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Mon 05/19/08 07:57 AM

flowerforyou

the play has not concluded
yet the lights are dimmed
piano accompaniment
as the scene is deftly changed

watch the mood shift
the darkness slowly lifts
overheard in an adjoining room
mystery unfolds off stage

where actors dramatically
reconstruct
directions and dialog
this is really life

:heart:




Life...what a harsh and stark play...

s1owhand's photo
Mon 05/19/08 08:11 AM
:cry: sad TRAGEDY sad :cry:
and
happy laugh COMEDY laugh happy

sweet heart when will we rest

:heart:

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Mon 05/19/08 08:27 AM

:cry: sad TRAGEDY sad :cry:
and
happy laugh COMEDY laugh happy

sweet heart when will we rest

:heart:


There is no rest for the wicked...and the weary...

frankfk's photo
Mon 05/19/08 08:50 AM
William Shakespeare was not a writer too wiz:wink: flowerforyou keep going onflowerforyou
My daddy once told me
Honey
Don’t ever think
You can write the script
Because even the
Sweetest of love stories
Can turn into
The worst
of melodramas
once a line
has been
ad libbed …

Just when the
stage is set …
All the players
are in place
and the
dialogue
so lovingly
well crafted
is about to
be spoken …
A surprise
character
will steal
the scene
and send
your story
Shifting
Rapidly
Frighteningly
and Painfully
into a
whole
new
genre
and
direction …

Oh Daddy …
When did
my Oscar award
winning life
turn into
such a cheap
and tawdry
soap opera?
Is it
too late
to get
another
screen writer
and save
The Story
… of Me??






Dragoness's photo
Mon 05/19/08 09:01 AM
Never too late, MsWizard, great writeflowerforyou

no photo
Mon 05/19/08 09:01 AM
Great write, I think mine has went from soap opera to Jerry Springer laugh laugh

no photo
Mon 05/19/08 10:04 AM

William Shakespeare was not a writer too wiz:wink: flowerforyou keep going onflowerforyou
My daddy once told me
Honey
Don’t ever think
You can write the script
Because even the
Sweetest of love stories
Can turn into
The worst
of melodramas
once a line
has been
ad libbed …

Just when the
stage is set …
All the players
are in place
and the
dialogue
so lovingly
well crafted
is about to
be spoken …
A surprise
character
will steal
the scene
and send
your story
Shifting
Rapidly
Frighteningly
and Painfully
into a
whole
new
genre
and
direction …

Oh Daddy …
When did
my Oscar award
winning life
turn into
such a cheap
and tawdry
soap opera?
Is it
too late
to get
another
screen writer
and save
The Story
… of Me??








Thank you Frank...I plan on continuing my writing....:heart:

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Mon 05/19/08 10:04 AM

Never too late, MsWizard, great writeflowerforyou


Thank you Dragon...flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Mon 05/19/08 10:04 AM

Great write, I think mine has went from soap opera to Jerry Springer laugh laugh


Yeah...I certainly hear that....sigh...

frankfk's photo
Mon 05/19/08 10:32 AM
good, quitters are losers, an old saying but still carrying a lot of weight in it.flowerforyou flowerforyou

William Shakespeare was not a writer too wiz:wink: flowerforyou keep going onflowerforyou
My daddy once told me
Honey
Don’t ever think
You can write the script
Because even the
Sweetest of love stories
Can turn into
The worst
of melodramas
once a line
has been
ad libbed …

Just when the
stage is set …
All the players
are in place
and the
dialogue
so lovingly
well crafted
is about to
be spoken …
A surprise
character
will steal
the scene
and send
your story
Shifting
Rapidly
Frighteningly
and Painfully
into a
whole
new
genre
and
direction …

Oh Daddy …
When did
my Oscar award
winning life
turn into
such a cheap
and tawdry
soap opera?
Is it
too late
to get
another
screen writer
and save
The Story
… of Me??








Thank you Frank...I plan on continuing my writing....:heart:

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 05/19/08 10:57 AM
Just like Angel said, be yourself and write the story...no matter what it turns out to be, it will be the best in your eyes. Besides, soap operas don't have reruns...lol

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