Topic: Jaws of death..
greeneyedlady42's photo
Wed 02/07/07 06:44 AM
She started as an innocent flower
Beautiful and bright with dreams
But all that echoed in her head
Were daddys furious screams
He stole her heart, crushed her pride
her visions turned to dust
He shook her whole world apart
And robbed her of her trust.

Felt like she was in the jaws of death

She doubted everything she did
knowing she'd only fail
A path of destruction lay
all along lifes trail.
She cried out only to be loved
Thats all that could save her now
Tho she wanted it desperately
She didnt know quite how.

She would ever escape the jaws of death

Cybear's photo
Wed 02/07/07 06:55 AM
Wow!GEL,that is deep.And very powerful.I Luv it,please keep them
coming.Bear makes mental note;1)Be ever aware of any traps lying
about2)any jaws of Death whatsoever3)and any Venus fly traps that may
lay and wait.(lmao)Godspeed!Cybear.:smile: flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 02/07/07 07:35 AM
Oh Gel, my heart goes out to all that have had there
dreams taken away while they are so young. Very good
poem