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Topic: Just a Chick
hikerchick's photo
Wed 05/14/08 08:11 PM
She's really very lovely in her manners and her face
She lights the room up with her smile and calms you with her grace
When she knows that you are hurting, her humor's just the trick
I thought she was a saint, but I learned she's just a chick

She'd give you her last nickel if it would just help you out
Every day you are not with her, it's you she thinks about
She would bring you soup and toddies on the days that you are sick
I thought she was an angel, but I learned she's just a chick

If I could but live up to the example she has shown
I would make you feel so loved, and you would never feel alone
I'd like to be just like her, but I haven't learned the trick
There's nothing I would rather say than, hey, I'm just a chick

squirlbait1979's photo
Wed 05/14/08 08:13 PM
Edited by squirlbait1979 on Wed 05/14/08 08:14 PM
i know someone just like that and feel blessed because of it very nice flowerforyou

barefootbaby78's photo
Wed 05/14/08 08:14 PM
:heart: chicks rock:heart:

Lily0923's photo
Wed 05/14/08 08:23 PM
It almost sounds like a woman who lives in Kansas, but calls herself Montana... how ironic....

and I have to concur....

hikerchick's photo
Wed 05/14/08 08:24 PM

It almost sounds like a woman who lives in Kansas, but calls herself Montana... how ironic....

and I have to concur....
hhmm..perhaps she was my muse?

Lily0923's photo
Wed 05/14/08 08:29 PM


It almost sounds like a woman who lives in Kansas, but calls herself Montana... how ironic....

and I have to concur....
hhmm..perhaps she was my muse?


you and I don't do much without muses dear.... not much at all...:tongue:

hikerchick's photo
Wed 05/14/08 08:33 PM



It almost sounds like a woman who lives in Kansas, but calls herself Montana... how ironic....

and I have to concur....
hhmm..perhaps she was my muse?


you and I don't do much without muses dear.... not much at all...:tongue:


that is why we are both so a-musing.

*snort*laugh laugh laugh

hikerchick's photo
Wed 05/14/08 08:49 PM

i know someone just like that and feel blessed because of it very nice flowerforyou


This is based on a true-life person and I feel blessed to know her as well.

Lily0923's photo
Wed 05/14/08 08:53 PM




It almost sounds like a woman who lives in Kansas, but calls herself Montana... how ironic....

and I have to concur....
hhmm..perhaps she was my muse?


you and I don't do much without muses dear.... not much at all...:tongue:


and hard to figure out which makes us A-maze-ing.

that is why we are both so a-musing.

*snort*laugh laugh laugh

HMontana's photo
Thu 05/15/08 04:59 AM
Edited by HMontana on Thu 05/15/08 04:59 AM
Aren't you both too funny? laugh laugh

And sweet.flowerforyou

Thank you, Hiker. That was a great way to start my day. I don't think anyone's ever written a poem for me! And a very generous one, at that!

I love you, darling!:heart:


Signed,
Just a chick:wink:

no photo
Thu 05/15/08 06:07 AM
:smile: flowerforyou drinker

hikerchick's photo
Thu 05/15/08 04:06 PM

Aren't you both too funny? laugh laugh

And sweet.flowerforyou

Thank you, Hiker. That was a great way to start my day. I don't think anyone's ever written a poem for me! And a very generous one, at that!

I love you, darling!:heart:


Signed,
Just a chick:wink:


You are so welcome!flowerforyou

hikerchick's photo
Fri 05/16/08 06:19 PM
Just wanted to remind everyone how wonderful Ms Montana is.

kc0003's photo
Fri 05/16/08 08:59 PM
well she must be to inspire such nice write from a friend
that was very kind and nicely written

flowerforyou flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Sat 05/17/08 08:04 AM
Chicks...

Can't live with them. Can't live with them. laugh I keed! bigsmile

Great Write! flowerforyou

no photo
Sat 05/17/08 08:07 AM
cool chicks rule my world drinker drinker

lifestooshort6's photo
Sat 05/17/08 08:08 AM
flowerforyou Lovelyflowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 05/17/08 09:44 AM

well she must be to inspire such nice write from a friend
that was very kind and nicely written

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Ditto flowerforyou

hikerchick's photo
Sat 05/17/08 05:02 PM


well she must be to inspire such nice write from a friend
that was very kind and nicely written

flowerforyou flowerforyou



Ditto flowerforyou


She is - she is our own HMontana.

thanks guys, for the kind words. It is so nice writing poetry in this forum. So many kind people.

HMontana's photo
Sat 05/17/08 05:08 PM
If I could only have a MAN love me as much as you do, I'd be in heaven.laugh laugh

You are too generous, btw. :heart:

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