Topic: Passionate Desire
roughrouge's photo
Tue 02/06/07 06:03 PM
I hunt for you with untamed passion
Nocturnal desires coming alive like wild fire
I roam through the night searching restlessly
Like a lost soul that can never rest
Until its justified, pacified, satisfied

Ah, love, I want to discover your hidden pleasures
revelead on the lips of the night wind
Careless whisper thrown across the sky
Taunting, teasing, caressing, pleasing

I cannot rest until I find your sweet embrace
Desire clothe me like the night
Passion seeps into my soul capturing my heart in its hand
Wrapping its arms around me like chains

I want to drink of your pure wine
Until its intoxication sends me into bliss
I'm gripped by severe pangs of hunger
The likes of which only you can satisfy

Ah, love, what have you done to me?
Is it a spell you cast on me?
Your embrace keeps me mesmerized
As if in distant world, a distant land
Me, the mighty, thriving on conquest
Now conquered by your passionate nature

your wish is now my comand
I live only to serve you; to please you
My fervent prayer the air that I breathe
To love, I surrender all forever and for always

Mark Hill

michael1313's photo
Tue 02/06/07 06:10 PM
Good Work...
this one is for th books too!smokin

roughrouge's photo
Tue 02/06/07 06:52 PM
thanks mike...love's a pwrful emotion :)

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 02/06/07 06:54 PM
Very good and yes love is the most powerful emotion
we do have it can make us or break us if we are not
careful. Very niceflowerforyou

Cybear's photo
Tue 02/06/07 07:02 PM
Superb work Mark.I enjoyed this very much.I think Love is the most
powerful emotion in a human being's life.Always has;and always will be
for all time.Thx!Godspeed!Cybear.glasses

roughrouge's photo
Tue 02/06/07 07:15 PM
thanks guys..this one is a little different but its expressing a real
part of us :)we're passionate beings and its a beautiful thing

LAMom's photo
Thu 02/08/07 02:54 AM
Mark, Love is amazing,,, Beautiful Poem