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Topic: Borrowed Love
hauveralan Joined Mon 04/07/08 Posts: 2827	Wed 05/14/08 12:45 AM
ONE HOUR AND A HALF MY BELOVED HAS BEEN GONE MY CHOSEN LOVER FOR LIFE THE ONLY ONE I HOLD TIGHT SHE HAS GONE TO HER HOME THE HOME ON THE HILL THE HOME THAT SHE SHARES WITH HER BELOVED MAN THE ONLY ONE SHE HOLDS TIGHT AS SHE LYES DOWN, TO CLOSE HER EYES. SEE MY BELOVED IS NOT MINE BUT ONLY PART OF THE TIME AND NO MATTER HOW HARD I FIGHT TO MAKE MY BELOVED MINE SHE WILL NEVER HOLD ME, QUITE, AS TIGHT AS SHE HOLDS HER BELOVED EACH AND EVERY NIGHT

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Wed 05/14/08 12:47 AM
Very nice

hauveralan Joined Mon 04/07/08 Posts: 2827	Wed 05/14/08 12:49 AM
Very nice THANKS I FIGURED EVERYONE ELSE WAS DOING IT

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Wed 05/14/08 12:53 AM
Very nice THANKS I FIGURED EVERYONE ELSE WAS DOING IT

Kurhein Joined Tue 05/13/08 Posts: 42	Wed 05/14/08 12:56 AM
That was pretty good.

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Wed 05/14/08 08:11 AM
Sadistic Write! =

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Wed 05/14/08 08:14 AM
nice write dude wish i could give you some advise but i don't know what to say

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