Topic: Longing for a mothers love
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Mon 02/05/07 03:15 PM
I fell the anger build
And climb deeper within me
Don't know what to do
And it's getting hard to see
I try so hard
To get where it is i'm going
It just won't stop
The pain and anger keeps on flowing
What can i possibly do
To make you see
How damn hard it is
To be the me you want me to be
Over the years you've hurt me so
Turned me away in times
I had no where else to go
You've taken me emotionally
All the way to hell and back
You didn't even blink an eye
As i began to crack
You hold so tight under your thumb
I try so hard to be the right one
Why can't you see
What you're doing to me
Why can't you be
All i've ever needed you to be
My mother...my friend

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Mon 02/05/07 04:04 PM
aww thats relly good..:smile: :smile: :smile:

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Mon 02/05/07 04:55 PM
yer mom sounded like mine ...

hopes it is all better now?
good poem Jennflowerforyou

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Mon 02/05/07 04:58 PM
actually it worse now than when i was young

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Mon 02/05/07 04:58 PM
That was really good Sugarjen.

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Mon 02/05/07 09:14 PM
that was great gen..good writing