Topic: The Flicker In The Jar
Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 05/12/08 06:46 AM

A brand new candle
In a decorator jar,
The aroma therapy
Is sensuous by far.
It heightens the senses
Makes one aroused,
Before it's even lit
It raises ones brow.

As I take a flame to it
Lighting the little wick,
Seeing the little crackle
As it begins to flick.
Watching as it burns
Gently sniffing the air,
The essence that protrudes
Is easy to bare.

After a while
The heat melts the core,
Burning down so slowly
As it burns even more.
Before long,
It's like a bright glowing star,
It burns down completely
That flicker in the jar.

Redsoxfan1's photo
Mon 05/12/08 07:40 AM
Lovely, (((Robert)))! Well written!flowerforyou :heart:

Sweet_and_Sassy's photo
Mon 05/12/08 04:13 PM
awww that is perfect...

You have been a busy writer...

I hope your candle never burns out flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 05/12/08 05:59 PM

awww that is perfect...

You have been a busy writer...

I hope your candle never burns out flowerforyou

Thank you Sweet...It might meet in the middle but hopefully never burns out..


And thank you Erica...glad you liked it.

pkh's photo
Tue 05/13/08 05:43 AM
flowerforyou awww sweet my friend

Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 05/13/08 06:29 AM

flowerforyou awww sweet my friend

Thank you so much Pam....have I got a surprise for you.