Topic: A Dreamers Wishes
shybo57's photo
Fri 05/09/08 05:58 PM
A Dreames Wishes

Walk with me a silver at low tide
Atop the cool and shifting sand
While the sun sizzles slowly into the ocean
Let my dreams transmit through my hands

If I could dream of a wish of perfection
And this dreamers wish came true
I'd dream a jinnie right from their bottle
And here's what I'd wish for you.

I'd fill your pockets full of bright spring mornings
And hide rainbows in your shoes
I'd chip off a small piece of heaven
And bring a twinkling star to you.

Let you taste a bite of the milky way
And leave your footprints on the moon
Where we'd danced across the universe
And sing you a happy tune.

Drink a toast to you with the small dipper
Filled with starlite and champaine
Pick a bouquet of stars for the who you are
And start each day of your life the same....

7/2/03 Huey Bennett....

LAMom's photo
Fri 05/09/08 05:59 PM
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Very Nice,, Welcome to our home

pkh's photo
Fri 05/09/08 06:55 PM
flowerforyou very nice...welcome

d4tc's photo
Sat 05/10/08 02:44 AM
Edited by d4tc on Sat 05/10/08 02:46 AM
WOW! This part peeked my interest;

"I'd dream a jinnie right from their bottle
And here's what I'd wish for you."

Once I heard that, I knew it was only going to get better. And sure enough, I was right! Good Job Man. Looking forward to future reads. happy

shybo57's photo
Sat 05/10/08 03:33 AM
I want to thank you all for your kind coments.
I appreciate them, I'm new here and I love to write.
I was glad to you here, thanks, shybo57...

shybo57's photo
Sat 05/10/08 03:44 AM
Thanks for making me feel welcome here, I look forward to reading some here, and getting to hopefully find new friendships. Take care, shybo57...