Topic: Polished Surface
s1owhand's photo
Wed 05/07/08 05:23 PM
Polished Surface

the polished surface
look here my friend
self-analysis' deceitful analyst
the vote is not disinterested
not roots of this tree
nor branches
reach to their conclusions
in a symmetric way
the river is on the right
on the forest border
one side full shade
little grows in musty shadows
profusion of urgent leaves
lunge into the opening
over grass
into warm blankets
of sunlight
unevenly beautiful
symmetry
overrated
flawed
the mirror has always been broken
don't show me
me today
let's close our eyes
and see
tomorrow


(inspired by Looking Glass)

Derekkye's photo
Wed 05/07/08 05:23 PM
My step dad was Polish.

s1owhand's photo
Wed 05/07/08 05:27 PM
drinker

"Staroszcz nie radoszcz"
"Na Zdrowie!"

drinker

lilbity's photo
Wed 05/07/08 05:30 PM
if more people only understood the truth in that statment

kc0003's photo
Wed 05/07/08 05:38 PM
he means the guy married to his mother…..right?

laugh laugh laugh

pkh's photo
Wed 05/07/08 05:42 PM
Both beautifully doneflowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Wed 05/07/08 05:50 PM
excellent piece s1ow....

drinker smokin glasses

no photo
Wed 05/07/08 05:52 PM

Polished Surface

the polished surface
look here my friend
self-analysis' deceitful analyst
the vote is not disinterested
not roots of this tree
nor branches
reach to their conclusions
in a symmetric way
the river is on the right
on the forest border
one side full shade
little grows in musty shadows
profusion of urgent leaves
lunge into the opening
over grass
into warm blankets
of sunlight
unevenly beautiful
symmetry
overrated
flawed
the mirror has always been broken
don't show me
me today
let's close our eyes
and see
tomorrow


(inspired by Looking Glass)


And it's a beautiful piece....as always...:heart: :heart:

d4tc's photo
Wed 05/07/08 06:05 PM

My step dad was Polish.


LOL!



Cool Write s1owhand. Clever reply. :wink:

s1owhand's photo
Wed 05/07/08 06:18 PM

And it's a beautiful piece....as always...:heart: :heart:


:heart: reflections of you :heart: (((MW)))

thank you all for reading Derekkye, lilbity, kc, pkh, d4tc

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 05/07/08 08:13 PM
flowerforyou happy flowerforyou
Nice write slow...

Noden's photo
Wed 05/07/08 08:26 PM
Whoooohaaaa!!!

((Slow))

god how much you remind me of a "gangster"
of days gone by, with stoggie in one hand
and that look or air of confidence filling
the area around you...whilish sippin on brandy

anyway's as always..

thnks...devil devil devil

LAMom's photo
Thu 05/08/08 08:36 AM
You my friend are quite awesome if I may say so,,, Your depth overwhelms me at times and your spirit well I am in Awe and have been from day one,,,,

flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 05/08/08 08:37 AM


And it's a beautiful piece....as always...:heart: :heart:


:heart: reflections of you :heart: (((MW)))

thank you all for reading Derekkye, lilbity, kc, pkh, d4tc


<<----adores s1ow...:heart:

s1owhand's photo
Thu 05/08/08 10:18 AM

Whoooohaaaa!!!

((Slow))

god how much you remind me of a "gangster"
of days gone by, with stoggie in one hand
and that look or air of confidence filling
the area around you...whilish sippin on brandy

anyway's as always..

thnks...devil devil devil


my preference is Martell XO :wink: (((Noden)))


<<----adores s1ow...heart


bigsmile :heart:

blushing

d4tc's photo
Thu 05/08/08 10:21 AM
Good enough to read again. lol!