Topic: Evenings Toll
No1sLove's photo
Wed 05/07/08 06:43 AM
Edited by No1sLove on Wed 05/07/08 07:03 AM
Sun on the horizon soft,
breeze whispers in my ear.
With the day now lost, comes the evenings cost
when no lovers voice I hear.

Every noise rings louder now,
mocks the silence of the dark.
its reckless way, keeps sleep at bay
til dawn enters with the lark.

I cry, “What toll will you demand
of me, to make this madness cease;
to still this raging noise at last
and let me sleep in peace?”

“No price” it taunts, “no pound of flesh,
no coin or service rendered.
The only way to banish me
is simply to surrender.”

The toll too high, the price too steep,
I sigh and lay my head down
I cannot pay what I do not own
so into the gloom I drown.

Eyes blink open, clean breath drawn
Pale light outlines my shades
One more evening’s met its end;
the toll yet left unpaid.

The lark now sings her chipper tune
of an evening come to pass. I ask,
"Won’t you come back at the glooming
with some song to make light last?”

Now, sun on the horizon soft,
breeze whispers as another day resends
With the day now lost, comes the evenings cost
Crap...here we go again!


Redsoxfan1's photo
Wed 05/07/08 06:56 AM
Very nice, No1!!:heart: I like that! Well done!!flowerforyou

No1sLove's photo
Wed 05/07/08 07:09 AM

Very nice, No1!!:heart: I like that! Well done!!flowerforyou
Awww, thanx (((Redsox))) means much from you hon! flowerforyou

Redsoxfan1's photo
Wed 05/07/08 07:10 AM


Very nice, No1!!:heart: I like that! Well done!!flowerforyou
Awww, thanx (((Redsox))) means much from you hon! flowerforyou
yqw!flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 05/07/08 07:47 AM
WOW...you are one heck of a writer yourself there...that was beautiful.

pkh's photo
Wed 05/07/08 07:48 AM
flowerforyou wow very nice

No1sLove's photo
Wed 05/07/08 07:48 AM

WOW...you are one heck of a writer yourself there...that was beautiful.
Oh thanx so much! Utterly flattered now!!!! blushing

2Btrue2One's photo
Wed 05/07/08 07:54 AM
That was absolutely beautiful.. very very well written.. I believe you also described the way a lot of people feel sometimes..flowerforyou :heart:

No1sLove's photo
Wed 05/07/08 07:55 AM

That was absolutely beautiful.. very very well written.. I believe you also described the way a lot of people feel sometimes..flowerforyou :heart:
I'm sure I'm not alone...with all the others online at 3am! laugh

kc0003's photo
Wed 05/07/08 07:57 AM
very nice no1s
well done indeed

flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 05/07/08 07:57 AM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :smile:

No1sLove's photo
Wed 05/07/08 09:42 AM

flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :smile:
(((KC))) flowerforyou (((Cy))))flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Wed 05/07/08 09:58 AM
"The only way to banish me
is simply to surrender.” "


Wow, powerful No1s ....flowerforyou :heart:

Wonderful affective expression overall...Ty for your write :smile:



No1sLove's photo
Wed 05/07/08 05:02 PM
I'm flattered that you like it (((AngelLight)))flowerforyou Thanks so much for reading it. happy

no photo
Wed 05/07/08 05:10 PM
True talent...flowerforyou smokin

No1sLove's photo
Wed 05/07/08 05:44 PM

True talent...flowerforyou smokin
Awww, thanks hon! flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 05/07/08 05:59 PM
good one

d4tc's photo
Wed 05/07/08 06:00 PM
"The only way to banish me
is simply to surrender"

WOOOW! Speechless...

bigsmile

No1sLove's photo
Wed 05/07/08 06:04 PM
Thanks so very much ((D4tc))flowerforyou ((123))flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 05/07/08 08:11 PM
flowerforyou happy flowerforyou