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Our love is that of a yellow rose
Whose splendor rises as the sun shows its face, as the dew lays on its petals. Whose petals expand further and richer Whispering secrets of happiness and affection. And even though with the fall of dusk All contentment is swept away, And the rose's petals unite as one Reflecting any light that may endeavor to shine through, The sun will always rise, the dew shall lay upon its petals glistening each day. And the rose's petals will eternally broaden Until they fully blossom into a stunning creation. Our love is that of this yellow rose Possessing a few imperfections That may cause evanescent wounds, But the internal radiance will everlastingly bestow healing and comfort. |
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Beautifully written!! I like that! Thanx for sharing!!
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Beautifully written!! I like that! Thanx for sharing!! Thanks Erica... Glad you liked it. I have written tons of them I just need to find them. We moved and I need to find the box they are all in! lol! |
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"The sun will always rise, the dew shall lay upon its petals
glistening each day. And the rose's petals will eternally broaden Until they fully blossom into a stunning creation." Lovely imagery ....Ty |
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"The sun will always rise, the dew shall lay upon its petals glistening each day. And the rose's petals will eternally broaden Until they fully blossom into a stunning creation." Lovely imagery ....Ty Thank you ever so much for all your praise on my poetry Angel! |
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Thank you once again! |
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nice write
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nice write thank you! |
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Thanks! |
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beautiful
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