Topic: With this ring-
greeneyedlady42's photo
Mon 05/05/08 06:34 PM
I wrote this song to some one I know God Is going to send me...I will sing it to him on our wedding day-


With this ring-
I thee wed...
Its more to me
Baby cant you see
Than the words we've said;

Because the vision in our hearts'
Is the vision in our heads
my love I pledge-
With this ring

With this ring I want the world to know
That is you my love who sets me all aglow
And that I give my love with all my heart
what Gods brought togehter let no man tear apart
My love I pledge with this ring...

With this ring
I make a vow-
To be as pure
and as true to you
as I am right now

And with this ring I want the world to know
Thats you my love who sets me all aglow
And all I have in this whole world dont mean a thing-
With you you -
And this ring....

franshade's photo
Mon 05/05/08 06:39 PM
nice work flowerforyou

just my opinion, cover and protect your work/song. once it's posted online it's fair game for anyone.

keep on writingflowerforyou


MirrorMirror's photo
Mon 05/05/08 06:41 PM
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lifestooshort6's photo
Mon 05/05/08 06:43 PM
flowerforyou

greeneyedlady42's photo
Tue 05/06/08 05:56 AM
Thanks fran been copyrighted for 8 yrs now...
Guess I shoulda put that at the bottom hey?
All my work is pretty much "set"

Thanks for looking out for me tho.Shows you got heart.

franshade's photo
Tue 05/06/08 06:22 AM
you're welcomed, great work - flowerforyou flowerforyou