Topic: NIGHT FIGHT
angelicdemoness's photo
Wed 01/31/07 01:29 PM
NIGHT FIGHT

I hate when we fight
And it happens at night
I want to sleep
But you've just made me weep

We cant get it right
When we turn out the light
When you have to be right
And it starts up a fight

So fight in the morning
Right after dawn
Then by the evening
The bad mood is gone

So fight around lunch
Or mid-afternoon
If you keep it up late
I'll turn into a loon

I hate when we fight
And it happens at night
I just want to go
But you just say no

We cant get it right
When we turn out the light
If you have to be right
And it starts up a fight

I give the last word
Not one thing have you heard
You say 'I dont remember'
Then fires burn like timber

So if you have to fight
And you like it at night
George Foremans a fright
And he'll punch out your light

Tysons no dear
He will bite on your ear
If you have to fight
Go see them on a flight

See I hate when we fight
And we do it at night
Then we cant get it right
When we turn out the light

By: AnnaTazia Charbonnett

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 01/31/07 01:53 PM
Almost sounds like a Dr. Suess book...great ryming...and hint of humor,
LOL...


sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 01/31/07 01:53 PM
Almost sounds like a Dr. Suess book...great ryming...and hint of humor,
LOL...


sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 01/31/07 01:53 PM
Almost sounds like a Dr. Suess book...great ryming...and hint of humor,
LOL...


sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 01/31/07 01:53 PM
Almost sounds like a Dr. Suess book...great ryming...and hint of humor,
LOL...


sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 01/31/07 01:53 PM
Almost sounds like a Dr. Suess book...great ryming...and hint of humor,
LOL...


sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 01/31/07 01:54 PM
weird, don't know why that happened..sorry...

jerbear1966's photo
Wed 01/31/07 01:55 PM
laugh Love it!

no photo
Wed 01/31/07 01:56 PM
WOW, SWEETS, YA GOT STUCK HONEY,LOL....LMAO.BEEN HERE DONE THAT..
AND THIS POEM 'ROCKS'!!!!!!GREAT JOB......

karmafury's photo
Wed 01/31/07 02:04 PM
This is really, really good.

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 01/31/07 02:53 PM
Great poem really liked it and can feel it to been
there done that.



Hummm SCG ya kinda stuttered there did it get to you that bad lol

angelicdemoness's photo
Sun 02/04/07 09:15 AM
Yep, that one is Dr. Zuess on acid. lol. Hey, he fights too!

oldsage's photo
Sun 02/04/07 10:12 AM
Good poem lots of feeling & thought.