Topic: Lonesome Dove
michael1313's photo
Wed 01/31/07 09:22 AM
My long search for one true love,
I dream of hope,and lonesome dove,
along my search for one to love,
I dream for hope,to fly above,
I hope to fly,for passions cry,
within the clouds,upon the sky,
how I long for sweet love's try,
now my song for sweet love's eye,
how I long for home and plenty,
my path is long,alone and empty,
just one love to be free and true,
just one love for me and you,
to fly above our skies of blue,
lonesome dove,my heart to you,
you live a life,without a hate,
raise your young,without a mate,
forever young,within your date,
flying from those wolves of fate,
lonely dove how you fly so free,
lonely dove please fly to me,
rest those wings,and let me see,
your love sings,and sets me free,
lonesome dove play your sweet song,
upon the breeze where you belong,
upon the breeze,another lonely song,
send me please,her loving strong,
please fill my ears and lonely heart,
please quell my fears,for another start,
I spill my tears when we sadly depart,
another flight,dreams for a lonely heart...

Lonely Soulsmokin

redmange420's photo
Wed 01/31/07 09:29 AM
Great words cuz!

LAMom's photo
Wed 01/31/07 09:29 AM
Michael, your heart is worn on the outside for the
world to see, its your shield as you walk us through
life,,, Thank you, your words are so Beautiful !

brutis's photo
Wed 01/31/07 09:34 AM
very very good keep it up

terisa's photo
Wed 01/31/07 09:44 AM
beautiful...(sniffing)..sorry got to wipe away the tears here michael

no photo
Wed 01/31/07 09:49 AM
ahhhh Micky you will find her man I just KNOW-IT DUDE!!!!
And your words here are soo from your heart and soul!!!!!!
You will be in my WISHES for YOU to FIND HER or her find YOU man, you
deserve a nice lady of poem,,,,,,,,,and HEART!!!!

no photo
Wed 01/31/07 09:58 AM
That is just so beautiful i don't know what to say ,your a wonderful
poet

roughrouge's photo
Wed 01/31/07 10:02 AM
Michael, great words i love it - you're on the right path and will
capture her heart :) great job

michael1313's photo
Wed 01/31/07 10:34 AM
this one was written for a friend,
who is going through a very "trying" time right now...

I saw a Dove in the yard,and thought of her...

she knows who she is,
and needs to tell her son to HELP more,
and stop adding to her troubles...HER burdens...

Life is hard enough,without a mate...
Why make it harder?

I ask that your son reads this...
I also know he can help more than he does...
there is more to life than video games,
and high school,you are almost a MAN...
time to act like one,
Help your mom,she loves you more than life it's self...
without HER...you would not be here...M.

venusrose's photo
Wed 01/31/07 10:35 AM
May a white dove appear to you, bringing you a message of faith and
love, that your True Love will enter your life soon.

Michael, I love this poem. You are a gifted poet!

michael1313's photo
Wed 01/31/07 12:01 PM
thank you all for reading...

is this a gift,or just a curse,
hearts to lift within my verse,
lonelyness just getting worse,
to heal my soul,a lonely nurse,
one to hold my heart in bliss,
how I long for just one kiss... smokin

michael1313's photo
Wed 01/31/07 11:06 PM
only hoping for some day,while I am still young at heart...

Cybear's photo
Thu 02/01/07 03:58 AM
Fantastic!Michael.My initial thought has already rolled of the tongue of
venus~rose.May this beautiful white dove deliver to you the long awaited
news that you painfully await.The discovery of your soul mate delivered
in the form of an olive branch held gently in her mouth.No man who
possess such depth less love and a fine soul such as yours should ever
be left to languish in bitter loneliness.But with your steadfast
hope,she will be delivered into your awaiting arms.Godspeed!Cybear.

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 02/01/07 08:45 AM
Hummmm M yet another good one but makes me wonder
if that one with the special kiss is not closer
than you think.

slowtogetit's photo
Thu 02/01/07 09:56 AM
wow michael, it is a very sweet but true poem,with your gift of words
you will never be lonely,just waitng to fill a void.
all the best now and forever.

michael1313's photo
Thu 02/01/07 04:38 PM
thanx y'all for your kind words of hope!happy

I feel so close,yet so far away some days...

no photo
Sat 02/03/07 06:23 AM
my m1313 i thought that was very beautiful whoever you find!!
i hope she will have a life time to enjoy every word you write
keep em coming

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/03/07 10:40 AM
so far...I've seen alot of lonesome doves...

but none have landed upon my hand...smokin

I must watch from afar...smokin

michael1313's photo
Sun 02/04/07 12:05 PM
gonna try to get this one to music too!!!