You seemed so geniune
You seemed so real
With your words you
Made me feel so happy
Now i wonder if i
Am just sappy

As we spoke i never
Thought this would happen
I never knew how to
Just make the connection

You grabbed my heart
Just with your glow
Now i'll never be able
To tell or show you

Someone said she is pretty
What are you waiting for
And i was just content
To wait for more

As i am shy
I was willing to change
For as i sit and write this
We shall never know if this
Is for real


And if you don't know
Who you are
Just look into my eyes
With your big brown eyes

Because i can't say why it is
You made me feel this way
For if you don't know
Who you are by now
I guess i'll just sit
And say why

Slow, such beautiiful words written from within your
heart,,

i wanted to bury it in concrete yesterday, thank you mom. in no way am i
ever going to try to be a poet.i just figured that she has to know how i
feel. good luck with terry and have a safe flight.

Slow, Never bury your dreams, You have a beautiful heart, always
remember that...

mom you are just to sweet...thank you. and i hope i never have to write
a poem again, let's leave it to the people who can really do it.

Slow, getting Mushy once in awhile is good for you,,,

Slow, that's real nice. Hope she sees it.

btw. Poetry is only what is already in the heart, written for all to
see.

thank you mom, thank you karma

it took a lot of courage for me to post it, only because i'm very shy. i
did e-mail her karma and just asked if she had a moment to look at it
and tell me what she thinks.

mom, so i don't let you down, there are a few subtle hints there that
only she would know about.

Hi!Slow.How are you?I truly hope all is well.You are a really a good man
with a big heart,and one who is straight forward and honest.You speak
your mind directly with no sugar coating but with genuine truth and
respect always.I am sure the ladies here in our home away from home
appreciate this,and have a great deal of respect for you;such as
myself.I've been meaning to exchange these words with you,and I could
think of no grater opportunity then now.I truly hope your special words
reach her heart as true as an arrow of a cupids bow for you deserve
happiness and she would be a fortunate woman to have captured your
heart.I will say a prayer in fact in hopes that she feels your words.You
need not be a Poet to express oneself,you bring plenty of qualities to
the table that many a women wish to inherit.I loved you expression here
and I hope your intended recipient does also,for they are fine words
indeed.Please feel free to send me a friends request at your
convenience.I would be honored.Godspeed!Your Friend,Cybear.

Good stuff slow! I enjoyed readin this.

wow this is what makes it all worth it...you people are
fantastic...thank you's all.

Awwwwww Slow seee you do have a very big heart indeed
and it does shine through. Not just in your poem but in
your everyday writings. You have not only a big heart
but a very good sense of humor to go along with that.
I do know that being a poet is as Cybear says it is all
about expressing the words within that speak to you no
certain style its just those words from the heart as you
have done. And sure when she reads your words they will
surely touch her heart as well.

Slow, it's refreshing to see a man open his heart, not sappy at all.
Nice poem!

Slow...I agree with everything that has been said...A man in touch with
his feelings is a man that knows what he wants in a woman. The courage
it took to post this, says a lot about the deep emotion you feel for
this lucky lady. I hope she sees the effort and integrity within your
beautiful soul! Best of luck!

and it was a beautiful poem...I hope you find the strength within to
write more when you are ready...

Its nice to see others putting it on the line. The poets here are much
like you. We all started with one writing, and when we see how our style
develops we want to write more. It is all about being in touch with
yourself, Sappy is good as anyone.

:)

G

Slow this is spectacular, I really enjoyed reading it. I do hope she
knows who she is and just how special you are.Good luck my friend!!

ohhh slow that was beautifull, she is a lucky woman

DAMM-IT SLOW,,,,WOW.I DIDN'T KNOW YOU HAD THIS IN YA,LOL
But to be real, we all can speak from our hearts, but it just takes
feeling right about the moment....
You have made her see YOU and that my FRIEND is toooo cool!!!!
Great words by a great person!!!!

This is a very nice poem slow. It sounds so sincere. I know she will
love it.

txsgal,ccp,morena,venus,scg,gryphyn,iam4u+nycgirland everyone else who
read it.
thank you all for you kind words, i just wasn't going to let her go
before i could tell her how i felt.

iam4u, i never knew it was in me either i just know how i felt when she
wasn't there.iam4u and all, i've read a lot of posts and they all have
one thing in common.....just be real, and that is all i was.

it was all possible with some help from the other special lady
here.....txsgal your are just one incredible lady. any man should be
blessed to have your friendship.

thank you all..........