Topic: No hope
evangeline's photo
Tue 01/30/07 04:21 PM
When you look at me do you see my pain,
When you lok at me do you see the forbidden tears in my eyes,
Wanting to be released and pour down like the rain.
When you look at medo you see what I'm missing, do you know how to fill
the emptyness in my heart, the hole in my soul?
Do you have what it takes not to run,
but to stay by my side,no matter how wild this dream will ride on those
crashing tides,
Will you leave with the crashing waves,or will you stand besides me and
help me to see that there is more to this life than pain and misery.
When your with me do you hear my silent cries,can you not tell that my
heart is not alive,
Will you still stand beside me if this dream goes and turns into a
nightmares demise........
Will you?
Will you run away like everyone else,
when you dont understand, when I want my solitude,
when I need my own time.
When you look at me what will you see,
the one you let get away or the one you know could never be.
When you look at me, can you finally see.......
There is no hope, not for love... not for you or for me.

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 01/30/07 04:24 PM
Sometimes we wonder do they ever see?

karmafury's photo
Tue 01/30/07 04:25 PM
That is beautifully written Evangeline.

evangeline's photo
Tue 01/30/07 04:25 PM
thank you

soncatcher's photo
Tue 01/30/07 05:33 PM
wow, that was pretty profound!!!

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Tue 01/30/07 06:40 PM
nice evangeline..
keep it up
happy

michael1313's photo
Tue 01/30/07 08:18 PM
never give up hope!!!

good poem!!!