my little girl inside me
wont come out she wont be free
she runs and hides
only trying to find a place to die
i call her out to come and play
shes not there she went away
give it a chance and you will see
she only says would you let me be
i try to find her everyday
to find out why she went away
hate hunger and pain too
im running away from you
you drink smoke and tare our body down
sometimes you even act like a clown
how can i come to you
when you treat me like you do
i will try to be your friend
if you promise to never hurt me again

bySharon/daddysgirlforver
1-30-07

Wow Sherrie very insightful poem hun

Oops sharon sorry

Good words...
told you that you could do this poem stuff...

kojack i just read ur misguided few in the relationship forum and was
very glad someone gets it.

michael thankyou im trying to get there

the more you write,
the easier it will be to show your love upon these pages...

Please keep writing

yeah i guess i have writers block

just look at something happy,peaceful...

think of little rhymes...take notes...

then link them all together in a poem...

just that easy!

Very good indeed enjoyed it.

That was very well done. Thank you.

Excellent!DGF.I like this very much.Connect all them dots,reach out and
grab the elusive ones also;and even some of the painful memories meshed
in too,for it becomes awareness and knowledge.Lest we
forget.Godspeed!Cybear.

hey thanks everybody i really apreciate all the feed back