Topic: Old man
AngelMapper's photo
Wed 04/30/08 02:05 PM
The old man

Long ago I lost my pride
to the mountains I retreat to hide
Shame and lost hope
my heart torn and shreaded like rope
A simple thought prokes a tear
Falling down into my greying beared
The hands once so strong
struggle now to write this song

I am the old man
I struggle now to do what I can
So many sun rises ive seen in my days
Now my final sunset I watch, its final rays
Nothing I know, can stop what must be
Ill be at peace atlast for eternity

I am the old man
Remember, do more then you can

This is a simple poem, I hope the message is clear to do and not regreat any thing in the end.

MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 04/30/08 02:08 PM
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MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 04/30/08 02:09 PM
Live, Love, Laugh...

While we can!

Good write! flowerforyou

rush2001's photo
Wed 04/30/08 02:11 PM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 04/30/08 02:18 PM
:smile: drinker

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 04/30/08 02:24 PM
Stop and smell the roses while you canbigsmile