Topic: A Friends Devotion
smb8056's photo
Mon 01/29/07 04:11 PM
Trials and tribulations,
All of lifes frustrations,
Follow and surround me,
Sometimes its like im drowning.

The pain and all its misery,
has built a wall around me,
My families filled with sadness,
What to do with all this madness.

Your lies and manipulation,
Have caused these complications,
I need a resolution,
Before my prosecution.

As my world begins to crumble,
Out from underneath the rumble,
Lies an enemys attack,starring down your back.

As anger burns inside,
Faith and strength seem to guide her,
determined and devoted,
Love's her only motive.

Upon you she will sneak,
No time for you to flee,
Within her lies the key,
That will finally set me free.

SMB
A.K.A Angel

karmafury's photo
Mon 01/29/07 04:14 PM
Very, very nice SMB. I like it. Thank you.

smb8056's photo
Mon 01/29/07 04:21 PM
No thank you, I am inspired by my own life's experiences and apply that
in my writing. I value the feed back so I can become a better writer.

SMB

michael1313's photo
Mon 01/29/07 04:31 PM
Good poem SMB...

good start new bee...

we will be watching for more of your work!

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 01/29/07 04:32 PM
What can I say but great words girl glad to
see you posting very good work!!

smb8056's photo
Mon 01/29/07 04:38 PM
I love you guys I cant tell you how exciting it is to get such positive
feed back. I Will send more.

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Mon 01/29/07 05:43 PM
Beautiful way to express your emotions. Looking forward to more...

LAMom's photo
Mon 01/29/07 05:54 PM
Angel,,, Beautiful,,, Wanting to read more!!!