Topic: "DO YOU SEE?"
TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 01/28/07 10:14 PM
Do you really even see me?
Tell me, my words do you see?
Do you have any ideal?
That my words to you are real.
Do you even for once care?
Or do you even dare?
The words I do write.
To you each and every night.
If my words struck you like thunder.
I really sometimes wonder.
Would you hear me then?
Or would you just look away again.
Must my words cut you like a knife?
Just to let you know I have a life.
Do you even ever really see?
What it really does to me.
Do you really even care?
This burden that I do bare.
I’m there for you each night.
And read every word you write.
I feel when you are up or down.
But you don’t even know I’m around.
Do you really know I’m here?
Do you even see me, my dear?
Do you have any ideal?
That I’m here and real.

Morena350's photo
Sun 01/28/07 10:29 PM
just awesome gurly!!!

LAMom's photo
Sun 01/28/07 11:49 PM
Txs, Your heart speaks so beautifully

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 01/29/07 05:20 AM
Thanks Morena & LaMom for your kind words.

DANE1973's photo
Mon 01/29/07 05:27 AM
I know how ya feel.flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 01/29/07 11:26 AM
Awwww thank ya Dane! bigsmile

redmange420's photo
Mon 01/29/07 11:40 AM
GREAT work!! drinker drinker

michael1313's photo
Mon 01/29/07 11:42 AM
Ms.Txs...
good work!

I often have feelings like those myself...smokin

Cybear's photo
Mon 01/29/07 02:17 PM
Very painful,but excellent release Txs.I pray that we find our
significant other.I know we will eventually.Geez!But when,I know I'm
feeling ya here Txs.We must persevere;what other options are there
really.None that we want or need to exercise that's for sure. noway
Chin~up gurl we luv ya.Your Friend,Cybear. :smile: flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 01/30/07 08:14 AM
Humm Cybear all we can do is speak our minds and hope
they finally hear! Which I should have already done
before now Gawd knows I can talk.noway But there
are atually times I don't say what I really feel.
For now all is fine blushing

greeneyedlady42's photo
Tue 01/30/07 08:16 AM
Really powerful Txgal.
I am certainly relating to your words.

karmafury's photo
Tue 01/30/07 08:17 AM
Beautiful Txs. Hope that he he hears.

Gryphyn's photo
Tue 01/30/07 08:51 AM
Yes Txs, I hope he can here you. Miles of words can often be overheard,
but written words are easily seen.

:)

G

happy

no photo
Tue 01/30/07 11:26 AM
hey girl this was a great one for all those looking for someone
i really hope he gets it

kojack's photo
Tue 01/30/07 11:32 AM
another great poem Tx. Don t give up ... The man of your dreams is just
around the corner.

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 01/30/07 04:04 PM
Hummmmm Kojak is that around the corner or in the corner lol

Thank you daddysgirl, Ohh Gryphyn you are so very right.

Gel I hear ya girl lol

no photo
Tue 01/30/07 04:18 PM
Ohh powerful words Gurly, he better see it or I'm gonna whack him with
my fry pan!!