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Do you really even see me?
Tell me, my words do you see? Do you have any ideal? That my words to you are real. Do you even for once care? Or do you even dare? The words I do write. To you each and every night. If my words struck you like thunder. I really sometimes wonder. Would you hear me then? Or would you just look away again. Must my words cut you like a knife? Just to let you know I have a life. Do you even ever really see? What it really does to me. Do you really even care? This burden that I do bare. I’m there for you each night. And read every word you write. I feel when you are up or down. But you don’t even know I’m around. Do you really know I’m here? Do you even see me, my dear? Do you have any ideal? That I’m here and real. |
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just awesome gurly!!!
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Txs, Your heart speaks so beautifully
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Thanks Morena & LaMom for your kind words.
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I know how ya feel.
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Awwww thank ya Dane!
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GREAT work!!
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Ms.Txs...
good work! I often have feelings like those myself... |
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Very painful,but excellent release Txs.I pray that we find our
significant other.I know we will eventually.Geez!But when,I know I'm feeling ya here Txs.We must persevere;what other options are there really.None that we want or need to exercise that's for sure. Chin~up gurl we luv ya.Your Friend,Cybear. |
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Humm Cybear all we can do is speak our minds and hope
they finally hear! Which I should have already done before now Gawd knows I can talk. But there are atually times I don't say what I really feel. For now all is fine |
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Really powerful Txgal.
I am certainly relating to your words. |
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Beautiful Txs. Hope that he he hears.
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Yes Txs, I hope he can here you. Miles of words can often be overheard,
but written words are easily seen. :) G |
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hey girl this was a great one for all those looking for someone
i really hope he gets it |
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another great poem Tx. Don t give up ... The man of your dreams is just
around the corner. |
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Hummmmm Kojak is that around the corner or in the corner lol
Thank you daddysgirl, Ohh Gryphyn you are so very right. Gel I hear ya girl lol |
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Ohh powerful words Gurly, he better see it or I'm gonna whack him with
my fry pan!! |
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