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Topic: Passion
2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 04/28/08 12:10 PM
As the evening begins I light the fireplace we cozy on the couch and begin to embrace The kissing starts hands start to travel what a wonderful evening as it begins to unravel We slowly unbutton eachother's shirt Skin bared, there is nothing to say in the heat of the moment we transend time and space Our fingers begin to wonder as we touch places forbidden but these secrets we hold are no longer hidden Farther we go as we discard the clothes we are going to make love this we both know Sweet moanings of sensual delight as we make love under the moonlight We drift to another place where we both become one because making love to eachother is second to none By Daniel 04/28/08

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Mon 04/28/08 12:12 PM
Wow!

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 04/28/08 12:12 PM
Exquisite Daniel!!! WHEW!!! It's HOT in here!

ShyKBear Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 368	Mon 04/28/08 12:16 PM
Wow! Someone just turned up the heat!

Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Mon 04/28/08 12:17 PM
COLD SHOWER TIME!!!

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 04/28/08 12:25 PM
(((((Faithful))))) (((((Skybear))))) (((((Vicki))))) Awww... metaleagle, you might be right

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Mon 04/28/08 12:26 PM
(((2B))) Cold showers all around!!!

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 04/28/08 12:28 PM
(((2B))) Cold showers all around!!! I reckon so.. glad you liked it

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Mon 04/28/08 12:49 PM
woooohoooo Danielson something new and refreshing in your writing...very well done can ya feel the heat? lol

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 04/28/08 01:03 PM
woooohoooo Danielson something new and refreshing in your writing...very well done can ya feel the heat? lol um, yeah, ahem, just got out of the shower... whew...

sassyma Joined Wed 09/19/07 Posts: 1139	Mon 04/28/08 01:05 PM
great write

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Mon 04/28/08 01:06 PM
woooohoooo Danielson something new and refreshing in your writing...very well done can ya feel the heat? lol um, yeah, ahem, just got out of the shower... whew... LOL It's getting hot in here let's just take off all our clothes....lol omg this song is stuck in my head....

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 04/28/08 01:08 PM
Thank you sassyma sas...lol, what are you saying?

sassyma Joined Wed 09/19/07 Posts: 1139	Mon 04/28/08 01:09 PM
Thank you sassyma sas...lol, what are you saying? you are welcome me im not saying nothing

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Mon 04/28/08 01:13 PM
Thank you sassyma sas...lol, what are you saying? I do not know Danielson that song just popped in my head and it felt right to say to your poem lol

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 04/28/08 01:17 PM
LOL! Danielson. I just saw the pics. Now i get it, you have a black belt in poetry! ;) hahaha! Good write!

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 04/28/08 01:21 PM
Thank you sassyma sas...lol, what are you saying? you are welcome me im not saying nothing Ahem, why not?

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 04/28/08 01:23 PM
LOL! Danielson. I just saw the pics. Now i get it, you have a black belt in poetry! ;) hahaha! Good write! thanks man

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Mon 04/28/08 01:30 PM
LOL! Danielson. I just saw the pics. Now i get it, you have a black belt in poetry! ;) hahaha! Good write! thanks man lol now i got other ppl calling you Danielson lol rut roh my bad

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Mon 04/28/08 01:32 PM
Very well written, Daniel! Beautiful! I like that!