Topic: A Lonely Smile | |
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A smile alone could touch my heart,
just one kiss would make a start, just true bliss is for my heart, anything less would tear me apart, Take the time to smell a rose, fragrant sweet within my prose, within a dream as friendship grows, within a dream,just kiss my nose, Passions start a dreamy flight, passions fly in moonlit night, passions try with all my might, passions cry,this Dreaming Knight Just one kiss for tenderness, just a kiss for our true bliss, just a kiss for our happieness, just one kiss,for this I miss, Dream for me,oh beautiful one, walk with me to the setting sun, give a try,it might be fun, dream for me,oh special one.... Lonely Soul |
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Very nice!!! Really hits home! thanks
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Really beautiful Michael
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Awwwww very good M, ohh what
just a smile or kiss can do. |
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Sweetness!
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And the lepard seeks for his prey,very pretty Michael
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Just when I do not think they could get any better. You prove me wrong.
An other awesome job. One that I am sure that a lot of people can relate to. |
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Thank You all for reading!!!
and your beautiful words!!! Where were you all when I was a younger man??? |
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Did someone say they were being torn apart.Grrrrrrr.Ooooooops.Sorry I
misunderstood(bad bear;back to your cave) Another awesome one Michael.Godspeed!Cybear. A bear with sunglasses.Sweet!! |
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Michael, we have all matured into wonderful, fine ladies.
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Thanx Cybear,my Friend...
Venusrose...Mature Fine Ladies... wish I could find one of them for myself...lol... |
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You will Michael. One of my favorite sayings is to "surrender and
release", in other words, Let Go and allow God to help you. God Bless. |
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Thank You,and mat God Bless you too
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ooooops...MAY GOD BLESS YOU...
typo...lol... |
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Again i just love this poem read it again so had to comment again
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michael....i really dont know what to say on this one....its
breathtaking..please tell me u sent this one to publisher too.... |
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Thank You all for reading...
I read many poems, and some of the good ones I may read over and over... and Yes Terisa...it's on it's way to get published, but may not make it out untill th next weekend... Thanx again for reading y'all |
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