Topic: A Lonely Smile
michael1313's photo
Sun 01/28/07 03:06 PM
A smile alone could touch my heart,
just one kiss would make a start,
just true bliss is for my heart,
anything less would tear me apart,

Take the time to smell a rose,
fragrant sweet within my prose,
within a dream as friendship grows,
within a dream,just kiss my nose,

Passions start a dreamy flight,
passions fly in moonlit night,
passions try with all my might,
passions cry,this Dreaming Knight

Just one kiss for tenderness,
just a kiss for our true bliss,
just a kiss for our happieness,
just one kiss,for this I miss,

Dream for me,oh beautiful one,
walk with me to the setting sun,
give a try,it might be fun,
dream for me,oh special one....
Lonely Soulsmokin

debs3's photo
Sun 01/28/07 03:10 PM
Very nice!!! Really hits home! thanks

LAMom's photo
Sun 01/28/07 03:11 PM
Really beautiful Michael

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 01/28/07 03:12 PM
Awwwww very good M, ohh what
just a smile or kiss can do.

venusrose's photo
Sun 01/28/07 03:14 PM
Sweetness!

no photo
Sun 01/28/07 03:22 PM
And the lepard seeks for his prey,very pretty Michael:smile:

whispertoascream's photo
Sun 01/28/07 03:31 PM
Just when I do not think they could get any better. You prove me wrong.
An other awesome job. One that I am sure that a lot of people can relate
to.

michael1313's photo
Sun 01/28/07 04:31 PM
Thank You all for reading!!!
and your beautiful words!!!

Where were you all when I was a younger man???huh

Cybear's photo
Sun 01/28/07 04:56 PM
Did someone say they were being torn apart.Grrrrrrr.Ooooooops.Sorry I
misunderstood(bad bear;back to your cave)embarassed Another awesome
one Michael.Godspeed!Cybear.glasses A bear with sunglasses.Sweet!!

venusrose's photo
Sun 01/28/07 05:14 PM
Michael, we have all matured into wonderful, fine ladies.

michael1313's photo
Sun 01/28/07 05:23 PM
Thanx Cybear,my Friend...laugh

Venusrose...Mature Fine Ladies...

wish I could find one of them for myself...lol...smokin

venusrose's photo
Sun 01/28/07 05:27 PM
You will Michael. One of my favorite sayings is to "surrender and
release", in other words, Let Go and allow God to help you. God Bless.

michael1313's photo
Sun 01/28/07 06:35 PM
Thank You,and mat God Bless you toosmokin

michael1313's photo
Sun 01/28/07 06:36 PM
ooooops...MAY GOD BLESS YOU...
typo...lol...smokin

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Sun 01/28/07 09:32 PM
Again i just love this poem read it again so had to comment again

terisa's photo
Mon 01/29/07 08:13 AM
michael....i really dont know what to say on this one....its
breathtaking..please tell me u sent this one to publisher too....

michael1313's photo
Mon 01/29/07 09:09 AM
Thank You all for reading...

I read many poems,
and some of the good ones I may read over and over...

and Yes Terisa...it's on it's way to get published,
but may not make it out untill th next weekend...

Thanx again for reading y'allsmokin