Topic: Are you lonely my dear
AngelMapper's photo
Sat 04/26/08 10:26 PM
Edited by AngelMapper on Sat 04/26/08 10:34 PM
Are you lonely my dear?
Away from you're face I whip the tears
Love and lip stick they go hand and hand
You stand here silently unknowing Im you're man

That quiet look you give me says so much to my heart
Even as you stand here thinking its all falling apart
The clock ticks slowly away our lips close together
Love is life as seemless as lace and leather

Are you lonely my dear?
For you I will allways be here
Lips so smooth I melt to the core
Closing my eyes my head spins wanting more

The quiet look you give me says so much to my soul
Our bodys press tightly together as we become whole
The clock ticks slowly by our lips breathing so far apart
I cry here before you, knowing this dreams only from my heart

Are you lonely my dear
For you I will allways be here


Nicholas Duncan

FaithfulOne78's photo
Sat 04/26/08 10:27 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Sat 04/26/08 10:28 PM
very nice

AngelMapper's photo
Sat 04/26/08 10:30 PM
Thanks I just wrote that within like 2 miniuts after I made a small version of it on a previous post :)

codelockbox's photo
Sat 04/26/08 10:31 PM
drinker drinker

pkh's photo
Sat 04/26/08 10:32 PM

Thanks I just wrote that within like 2 miniuts after I made a small version of it on a previous post :)
wow that was good for such a short time,I'll have to go find the other.flowerforyou

AngelMapper's photo
Sat 04/26/08 10:36 PM
I think im gonna fit this one into my screenplay for the musical im writing :O just realised it is exactly what I want for one of the scenes. any ways if any one has a suggestion for this poem please gimme any idea's you have :).

pkh's photo
Sat 04/26/08 10:38 PM
I think many of us feel lonely and hope for that one to come and stay and make love last...