Just a little song im slowly working and adapting :P hope you like I wrote it after I woke up when i was 17 "Id been in a coma for 3 months"

Welcome to the twisted mind
Alone I stand raped inside
the jack has failed I have the queen
so bring the ransom to my twisted dreams

Felt of hate felt of lust
Burning my angel wings to dust
Fall deep into the pit of despair
what is this in the mirrior that I cant bare

Alice is gone wonderland is mine
Bring me the mindfull dreams of the twisted mind
Broken and bloody waking to only pain
I feel for my heart knowing Ill never be the same
You ask me my dear if I can cry
Theres nothing left in me to die

Ticks away the twisted mind
Never felt love wishing I could die
Despair rushing over me
I reach for the surface gasping for air

This is my twisted mind
Alone I stand raped inside

Nicholas, Duncan

Ah I see you're a bit of a poet you're self mirrior mirrior I like the one you got on you're page :) very enteresting!!!!! KODUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

very good again,sorry to hear you were in a comma.I hope you are still not feeling like you want to die...and my friend you will find love be patient and believe...good luck