Topic: Hate me Please
DeathsTreaty's photo
Fri 04/25/08 07:51 AM
Hate the way I do everything,
Hate the way I have Dinner ready every night when you get home,
Hate the way I clean just as much as you do,
Hate the way I try to ask "How was your day?",
Hate it when I admit I was wrong and try to fix it,
Hate it when I hug you when I see,
Hate how I say good morning and agood night as you pull you face away when I try to give at kiss every night,
Hate me for doing what I thought was best for us,
Hate me for trying to make life for us the best it could be,
Hate me for going to work and not spending money to save for vacations every summer,
Hate me for just being me

Sexyklp4U's photo
Fri 04/25/08 07:52 AM
huh huh

Jill298's photo
Fri 04/25/08 07:52 AM
nobody hates you treatyflowerforyou

lizardking19's photo
Fri 04/25/08 07:53 AM

nobody hates you treatyflowerforyou


I like that poem, kinda reminds me of that nirvana song "rape me"

LAMom's photo
Fri 04/25/08 07:53 AM

Hate the way I do everything,
Hate the way I have Dinner ready every night when you get home,
Hate the way I clean just as much as you do,
Hate the way I try to ask "How was your day?",
Hate it when I admit I was wrong and try to fix it,
Hate it when I hug you when I see,
Hate how I say good morning and agood night as you pull you face away when I try to give at kiss every night,
Hate me for doing what I thought was best for us,
Hate me for trying to make life for us the best it could be,
Hate me for going to work and not spending money to save for vacations every summer,
Hate me for just being me



(((( Hugs )))))

One day she will see the Beauty within you

stevil342001's photo
Fri 04/25/08 07:54 AM
i actually feel the warm and fuzzies ... here lollaugh

Gita36's photo
Fri 04/25/08 07:54 AM


nobody hates you treatyflowerforyou


I like that poem, kinda reminds me of that nirvana song "rape me"




noway

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 04/25/08 07:55 AM
Hummm you will one day find that one where the word HATE is replaced with the word LOVE. No longer will you hide in the dark but you will welcome the light.flowerforyou

Abracadabra's photo
Fri 04/25/08 07:57 AM
Sounds like someone's involved with the wrong person. flowerforyou

I fully understand your write. I imagine there are a lot of relationships out there that are precisely as your poem describes.

Really sad. :cry:



codelockbox's photo
Fri 04/25/08 08:03 AM
Very good writing, keep them comming. :smile: :smile:

no photo
Fri 04/25/08 08:14 AM

Sounds like someone's involved with the wrong person. flowerforyou

I fully understand your write. I imagine there are a lot of relationships out there that are precisely as your poem describes.

Really sad. :cry:




Yep!very true words indeed.Oh!I more than imagine,in fact this is absolutely true:cry:For many reasons like escaping a prev.abusive relationship & wanting better,insecurity,escaping poverty,an abusive childhood leading 1 right into the same scenario w/their relationship,lonliness.etc.& several others sadly.:(

PacificStar48's photo
Fri 04/25/08 08:22 AM


Hate the way I do everything,
Hate the way I have Dinner ready every night when you get home,
Hate the way I clean just as much as you do,
Hate the way I try to ask "How was your day?",
Hate it when I admit I was wrong and try to fix it,
Hate it when I hug you when I see,
Hate how I say good morning and agood night as you pull you face away when I try to give at kiss every night,
Hate me for doing what I thought was best for us,
Hate me for trying to make life for us the best it could be,
Hate me for going to work and not spending money to save for vacations every summer,
Hate me for just being me



(((( Hugs )))))

One day she will see the Beauty within you


Wow does that feel famiiiar.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 04/25/08 08:22 AM
flowerforyou

DeathsTreaty's photo
Fri 04/25/08 08:24 AM
Thank you all for Reading and commenting ^^


AngelLight's photo
Fri 04/25/08 08:37 AM
There is a certain spirituality to hatred. With hatred standing in stark contrast to Love, one can then decide what one wishes to be, or how one wishes to act, in relationship to the contrast :heart: