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| Topic: You need to understand,… I didn’t know | |
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Edited by
Abracadabra
on
Wed 04/23/08 10:40 AM
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Forgive me for your love I took for granted
Forgive me for the love I didn’t show Forgive me for my blatant inattentiveness You need to understand,… I didn’t know I didn’t know that I appeared so cold and heartless I didn’t recognize the love I failed to sow I felt my love for you so deeply I just thought that you’d intuitively know You gave your love so freely You filled my life with bliss You shared your love so easily and my response was so amiss I can’t believe how blind I was I held my emotions back I thought that I was being strong when all I did was get off track You were always there for me You were concerned with every detail You never missed a heartbeat and all I ever said to you,… is that you cling I accused you of surveillance I charged you with harassing me I indicted you for stalking me when all you ever really did was show how much you care How could I have been so blind? Why did I accuse you? I was betrayed by thoughts within my mind for my heart would not refuse you I let my stupid intellect be the driver of my heart like an imbecilic moron I put the horse before the cart Do I have the right to ask a pardon for the love I didn’t show? You need to understand,… I didn’t know   Abra (4/23/08) |
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Jerk!
  Nice write Abra! Full of heart!
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 That was very nice......... and very sad........
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(((( Abra )))))
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh tears in my eyes,,
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Jerk! Yeah REALLY!  
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Jerk! Yeah REALLY! Couldn't resist that! You're the nicest jerk I know!
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Ahhh yes, but now you are enlightened
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Couldn't resist that! You're the nicest jerk I know! That's the nicest thing anyone ever said to me. 
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If only this sentiment were possible for everyone to understand -
You've made me very reminiscent, and hopeful these feelings have somehow found their way into the hearts of past loves... |
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Ahhh yes, but now you are enlightened Now I just need to find someone who is willing to pardon me.
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It is you who must pardon you
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Ahhh yes, but now you are enlightened Now I just need to find someone who is willing to pardon me.  NO PARDON,,,YOUR sentenced to LIFE ON JUST SAY HI.!!!!!!! GOOD WRITE MY FRIEND......
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I like it a lot, wonderful job, thank you.
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"YOUR sentenced to LIFE ON JUST SAY HI.!!!!!!! "
LOL!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Nice written appology Abra- hope they see it... |
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Nice written appology Abra- hope they see it... It wasn't actually written to anyone in particular. I started writing it with thoughts of my mother's love. She's no longer with us to read it, but it wasn't really aimed at her anyway as it continued to evolve I slanted it toward a make-believe relationship. Unfortunately I have no one to apologize to on a romantic level. |
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Oh Ab- it was really good though...
allmost made me want to say your forgiven! (((hugs)))
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I didn't know the nights you cried
I didn't know the dreams cast aside I didn't know you were lonely too I didn't know what else to do I didn't know the love I missed I didn't know the the lips not kissed I didn't know what my life was to become I didn't know ... and now I'm numb ... a thought inspired by your touching write James ... |
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I didn't know ... and now I'm numb ... I can certainly identify with that last line especially.
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Abra- I think this applies to so many, many people. The feelings you write of are universal. Some may take this as a cautionary tale.
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