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Topic: Voyeurs
VFury Joined Tue 01/29/08 Posts: 170	Tue 04/22/08 01:23 PM
There are unpredictable times of day in every life, every absence when we become the most intimate strangers. In least likely settings we are forced together surprised by each other and find ourselves peeping toms on the edges of souls without allowances of familiarity without maps of spiritual curves and carnal irregularities. We are left to ponder pieces of passers by weighing our minds and hearts like tiny anvils.

1956deluxe Joined Thu 12/06/07 Posts: 8559	Tue 04/22/08 01:24 PM


MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Tue 04/22/08 01:26 PM
Nice write!

SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Tue 04/22/08 01:31 PM
Sometimes I feel like a voyeur on here!!

Abracadabra Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 17851	Tue 04/22/08 01:36 PM
That was a revealing write. and 'carnal irregularities' has a certain run to it. Oh,... me bad.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Tue 04/22/08 01:51 PM
That was really good V.

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Tue 04/22/08 01:51 PM
very nice write!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76471	Tue 04/22/08 01:52 PM
very nice

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