Topic: When........(warning risque)
Dragoness's photo
Sat 04/19/08 05:38 PM
Edited by Dragoness on Sat 04/19/08 06:13 PM
When........

When I look into your eyes
warmness floods me, heart flies
I just want to reach for you
feel you against my body hard and true

When you touch me warmly
anticipation grows greatly
I lay my hand on top of yours
encouraging you, desire soars

When you press against me urgently
oh yes, clothing falls willy nilly
flesh meets flesh, sweet heat
tasting, touching, souls meet

When you press for entry
I push back to take you in me
My breath leaves loudly
as we connect so deeply

When our bodies slid and rock together
each giving and receiving pleasure
our breaths and moans mingle
causing everything to tingle

When I clasp you and release
with sweat and begs of please
you cannot hold it and let go
your sweet heat to then flow

When breaths calm
throbbing slows some
enjoying our shared space
for this is our place

When.......

bc 04/19/08


Can you tell what I am missing??? LOL

When seems to be the question too..lol

I did not know how risque I could get so it is a little tamer then I wanted it to be but oh well.


MirrorMirror's photo
Sat 04/19/08 05:39 PM
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Etrain's photo
Sat 04/19/08 05:40 PM
beautiful....but I need a cold shower nowflowerforyou

Dragoness's photo
Sat 04/19/08 05:42 PM

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Glad you enjoyed Mirrorflowerforyou

Dragoness's photo
Sat 04/19/08 05:43 PM

beautiful....but I need a cold shower nowflowerforyou


Thanks Etrainflowerforyou Me tooblushing bigsmile

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 04/19/08 05:55 PM
I think some of the- errrrrr us- poets are in heat! laugh

Good write! :tongue: drinker flowerforyou

7Kate7's photo
Sat 04/19/08 05:56 PM
Nice write! (Thinking very hard about baseball right now:smile: )

Dragoness's photo
Sat 04/19/08 06:11 PM

I think some of the- errrrrr us- poets are in heat! laugh

Good write! :tongue: drinker flowerforyou


LOL thanks teddyflowerforyou

Dragoness's photo
Sat 04/19/08 06:14 PM

Nice write! (Thinking very hard about baseball right now:smile: )


Thanksflowerforyou , does thinking of baseball help? I have heard that before lollaugh flowerforyou bigsmile

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sat 04/19/08 06:17 PM
Ok, we all know I'm errr, well, ummm different, but between this poem and Ms. T-Bear's Essence; I have the Beatles in my head

"Baby you can drive my car"

"Beep, beep, beep, beep, yeahhhhh
and baby, I love you"

Dragoness's photo
Sat 04/19/08 06:19 PM

Ok, we all know I'm errr, well, ummm different, but between this poem and Ms. T-Bear's Essence; I have the Beatles in my head

"Baby you can drive my car"

"Beep, beep, beep, beep, yeahhhhh
and baby, I love you"



LOLlaugh laugh laugh laugh flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sat 04/19/08 10:24 PM
Whoa...somebody call 9-1-1...the lady is on fire...that was great Barb...only a true poet could see the risque in there and envision what you are missing. So am I.

no photo
Sun 04/20/08 08:16 AM

When........

When I look into your eyes
warmness floods me, heart flies
I just want to reach for you
feel you against my body hard and true

When you touch me warmly
anticipation grows greatly
I lay my hand on top of yours
encouraging you, desire soars

When you press against me urgently
oh yes, clothing falls willy nilly
flesh meets flesh, sweet heat
tasting, touching, souls meet

When you press for entry
I push back to take you in me
My breath leaves loudly
as we connect so deeply

When our bodies slid and rock together
each giving and receiving pleasure
our breaths and moans mingle
causing everything to tingle

When I clasp you and release
with sweat and begs of please
you cannot hold it and let go
your sweet heat to then flow

When breaths calm
throbbing slows some
enjoying our shared space
for this is our place

When.......

bc 04/19/08


Can you tell what I am missing??? LOL

When seems to be the question too..lol

I did not know how risque I could get so it is a little tamer then I wanted it to be but oh well.




It was lovely.....:heart: flowerforyou :heart:

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 04/20/08 08:25 AM
Awwww is it getting Hot in here or is it just me laugh

Dragoness's photo
Sun 04/20/08 08:36 AM

Whoa...somebody call 9-1-1...the lady is on fire...that was great Barb...only a true poet could see the risque in there and envision what you are missing. So am I.


Thanks Robertflowerforyou

Dragoness's photo
Sun 04/20/08 08:37 AM


When........

When I look into your eyes
warmness floods me, heart flies
I just want to reach for you
feel you against my body hard and true

When you touch me warmly
anticipation grows greatly
I lay my hand on top of yours
encouraging you, desire soars

When you press against me urgently
oh yes, clothing falls willy nilly
flesh meets flesh, sweet heat
tasting, touching, souls meet

When you press for entry
I push back to take you in me
My breath leaves loudly
as we connect so deeply

When our bodies slid and rock together
each giving and receiving pleasure
our breaths and moans mingle
causing everything to tingle

When I clasp you and release
with sweat and begs of please
you cannot hold it and let go
your sweet heat to then flow

When breaths calm
throbbing slows some
enjoying our shared space
for this is our place

When.......

bc 04/19/08


Can you tell what I am missing??? LOL

When seems to be the question too..lol

I did not know how risque I could get so it is a little tamer then I wanted it to be but oh well.




It was lovely.....:heart: flowerforyou :heart:


Thanks Mswizsrdflowerforyou

Dragoness's photo
Sun 04/20/08 08:38 AM

Awwww is it getting Hot in here or is it just me laugh


Thanks Txsflowerforyou