Topic: fantasy
Queene123's photo
Sat 04/19/08 04:42 PM
this is not a fantasy as where others may have think it has been in this world as this is the reality of what we see and live in day in and day out, as our children grow and learn from us, they tend to teach us more of what we had not seen or learned from before, as our children are just little teachers that we grow fond of each day, they give us something to see when it comes to past loves. as when the hawk flys upon us we see the beauty within the sky and nature is taking its course once again

shoesmonkey's photo
Sat 04/19/08 04:49 PM
Honey, do you know anything about puctuation????????

Queene123's photo
Sat 04/19/08 04:52 PM

Honey, do you know anything about puctuation????????


yea. but does it matter, and are you trying to be teacher..(i dont think im in class.. thank you)

litecol2000's photo
Sat 04/19/08 05:03 PM
As one with an opened mind...I appreciate what you have written, regardless of grammer lessons. To each, his/her own. It was beautiful. Thank you for sharing.