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Edited by
TonyV
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Sat 04/19/08 08:14 AM
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her hair out of place
bruised on the outside but broken on the inside his anger for no reason theres no call for this treason?? insecure of his manhood his rage rages on and on fear abounds, its scent heavy in the air and all she could do was just stand there.... the torment of the tormentor never seem to cease he waged his private war as to gain release finally moments that lasted far to long found him leaving in his wrong leaving behind an unsettled calm now all broken, she had taken his place, he look at her and her swollen face... and cried MOM I hope this message isn't taken out of context it begins with us to stop this maddness it happens far far to much. |
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It sure does happen way toooooooooooo much!
Good write! |
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yes it does,good write
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