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Edited by
Lily0923
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Sat 04/19/08 12:25 AM
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You walked right in,
you sat right down, as if that is where you belonged. You read not the signs, disobeyed all the laws, and yet no prisoners were taken. My breath was gone, my pulse was quick, no perscription could cure my ill. You came uninvited, to this formal affair, no RSVP did you make. You were told to leave, cast to the sea, only to swim to the shore. You found the spot, with no effort at all, that gained entrance to my heart. Like the horse of the Trojans but not to deceive, made your debute in the grandest of styles. You took down the walls, with no thought of yourself, and etched your name in my soul. |
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NICE WRITE,,,,,
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Very nice
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Beautiful
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Good write!
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very nice
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Thanks...
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Wow. You are so talented.
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