Topic: “Journey of Tears” (THE WAY I SEEN IT)
TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 04/18/08 10:59 AM
I SEEN THIS TITLE IN DEN THREAD TO DO WELL THIS IS MY THOUGHTS!!

“Journey of Tears”

As each tear falls.
And I walk these lonely halls.
I wonder what went wrong.
I thought I was strong.

But a love like that.
One doesn’t just pull out of a hat.
I thought everything was fine.
And together we would drink wine.

I guess at times we do not see.
How cruel life can be.
I handed you my heart.
And you proceeded to tear it apart.

Why, if you really did not care?
Did you say you wanted to share.
A life built for two.
For if you saw things in a different view.

All you had to do is say.
This is not the way.
I would have understood.
And everything would have been good.

Now I watch all my fears.
Come back with all the tears.
This journey of tears is here.
At times I wish I could disappear.

As each tear streams down my face.
I sit here thinking in this place.
I’m starting to see things clear as it appears.
Here within this journey of tears.

K.L.M
4/18/2008


MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 04/18/08 11:07 AM
:cry: Good write (((Kristi))) Made me tear up!
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Sitngrin's photo
Fri 04/18/08 11:08 AM
Quite well done there, M'lady flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou



:heart:flowerforyou

~Den

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 04/18/08 11:10 AM

:cry: Good write (((Kristi))) Made me tear up!
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Awwww don't tear up it was only thoughtsbigsmile

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 04/18/08 11:10 AM

Quite well done there, M'lady flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou



:heart:flowerforyou

~Den


Thank you my friend.flowerforyou

Sitngrin's photo
Fri 04/18/08 11:10 AM


Quite well done there, M'lady flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou



:heart:flowerforyou

~Den


Thank you my friend.flowerforyou


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lurchs_sister's photo
Fri 04/18/08 03:09 PM
Nice write Kristi!!flowerforyou :cry:

Has Den got off his butt and done his version yet?:wink: laugh

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 04/19/08 09:26 AM

Nice write Kristi!!flowerforyou :cry:

Has Den got off his butt and done his version yet?:wink: laugh


Thanks for reading humm yes he did his lolbigsmile

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 04/22/08 10:40 AM
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lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 04/22/08 10:41 AM
Glad you kicked this back to the top so all could see what you did as well nice to compare and show we all care!

LOVE YA DOLLY!:heart:

LAMom's photo
Tue 04/22/08 10:46 AM
well now damn,, How in the Hell did I miss this one,, I tell ya,, my mind is off in so many directions,,

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Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 04/22/08 01:11 PM
Kristi..you hit the nail on the head with this one. I couldn't have said it better myself. But I'm tired of buying Kleenex.