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Topic: Welcome to My Oz
Wolfeyes58's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:07 PM
Welcome To My Oz

Let me take you to a land
Of reality, not make believe,
A place I plan to stay
A place I'll never leave.
A place that I envision
It's my own little Oz,
Come, let me tell you about it
Just because...

I don't dream about Munchkins
Or a good or a bad with,
I don't look down on little people
Or call women a *****.
I don't see a poppy field
Or a land of green,
But I will get to the point
And tell you what I mean...

When it comes to being a Scarecrow
Who wished he had a brain,
He's better off not having one
To not think through the pain.
The pain from a lost love
Wondering where to start,
He'd get back up on that stand
If he had any smarts.

Now being the Tin Woodman
Who only wanted a heart,
He wanted to feel love again
And to feel the rhythm start.
He knew one day it would break
And in time, it would mend,
I'd rather not have a heart
So it wouldn't happen again.

The Cowardly Lion wanted courage
So that he could be brave,
He wanted to be the King of Beasts
A world he could save.
Of the three, he lived and breathed
He had a heart and brain,
The courage that he wanted
Could help him through the pain.

Without a brain, heart or courage
I wouldn't have to feel,
A broken heart or discouragement
Which they need to heal.
My brain wouldn't have to think
Of my Dorothy leaving me,
I wouldn't be buried in the memories
Of what used to be.

I don't have to click my heels
So I can get back home,
I'm already there
By myself and all alone.
I don't have an Aunt Em
Or the Uncles three,
Just me and my dog Kaz
Where we'll always be.

If I could click my heels
And my wishes came true,
We'd always be together
Just me and you.
Fantasies and fairy tales
Are just make believe,
If I can be with you always
I never want to leave.

Akinyahalo's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:11 PM

Welcome To My Oz

Let me take you to a land
Of reality, not make believe,
A place I plan to stay
A place I'll never leave.
A place that I envision
It's my own little Oz,
Come, let me tell you about it
Just because...

I don't dream about Munchkins
Or a good or a bad with,
I don't look down on little people
Or call women a *****.
I don't see a poppy field
Or a land of green,
But I will get to the point
And tell you what I mean...

When it comes to being a Scarecrow
Who wished he had a brain,
He's better off not having one
To not think through the pain.
The pain from a lost love
Wondering where to start,
He'd get back up on that stand
If he had any smarts.

Now being the Tin Woodman
Who only wanted a heart,
He wanted to feel love again
And to feel the rhythm start.
He knew one day it would break
And in time, it would mend,
I'd rather not have a heart
So it wouldn't happen again.

The Cowardly Lion wanted courage
So that he could be brave,
He wanted to be the King of Beasts
A world he could save.
Of the three, he lived and breathed
He had a heart and brain,
The courage that he wanted
Could help him through the pain.

Without a brain, heart or courage
I wouldn't have to feel,
A broken heart or discouragement
Which they need to heal.
My brain wouldn't have to think
Of my Dorothy leaving me,
I wouldn't be buried in the memories
Of what used to be.

I don't have to click my heels
So I can get back home,
I'm already there
By myself and all alone.
I don't have an Aunt Em
Or the Uncles three,
Just me and my dog Kaz
Where we'll always be.

If I could click my heels
And my wishes came true,
We'd always be together
Just me and you.
Fantasies and fairy tales
Are just make believe,
If I can be with you always
I never want to leave.

pretty damn good poem just need to learn a lot more about oz to write anything about it

LightVoice's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:13 PM
wow flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:16 PM

wow flowerforyou

Glad you liked it Light...


Akin...I know alot about Oz, I was just giving a brief synopsis of my Oz.

Akinyahalo's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:21 PM


wow flowerforyou

Glad you liked it Light...


Akin...I know alot about Oz, I was just giving a brief synopsis of my Oz.
so have you read all of the oz chronicles

Wolfeyes58's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:27 PM



wow flowerforyou

Glad you liked it Light...


Akin...I know alot about Oz, I was just giving a brief synopsis of my Oz.
so have you read all of the oz chronicles


This is not about Frank Baum's story...it's a comparison of my vision of my Oz. You either like it or you don't, it doesn't matter to me.

Differentkindofwench's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:27 PM
The poem was great. The fantasies and fairy tales all have morals to the story and human growth potential. They can be used as tools for learning and how to be a better "human".

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:28 PM
Nice write Robert this is really vivid!flowerforyou flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:28 PM

The poem was great. The fantasies and fairy tales all have morals to the story and human growth potential. They can be used as tools for learning and how to be a better "human".

Thanks Wench....that was sweet of you.

hikerchick's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:29 PM



wow flowerforyou

Glad you liked it Light...


Akin...I know alot about Oz, I was just giving a brief synopsis of my Oz.
so have you read all of the oz chronicles



It was a poem; not an textbook about Oz.

And a wonderful poem, I might add! flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:32 PM

Nice write Robert this is really vivid!flowerforyou flowerforyou

Thanks sweetie I tried.

Wolfeyes58's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:33 PM




wow flowerforyou

Glad you liked it Light...


Akin...I know alot about Oz, I was just giving a brief synopsis of my Oz.
so have you read all of the oz chronicles



It was a poem; not an textbook about Oz.

And a wonderful poem, I might add! flowerforyou

I appreciate that hiker...thanks for seeing it for what it is.

Redsoxfan1's photo
Thu 04/17/08 08:40 PM
Very well written Robert!:heart: I liked that one! very nice!:heart:

kc0003's photo
Thu 04/17/08 08:53 PM
well thought out Robert
this one has me thinking
very good indeed


bigsmile

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 04/17/08 08:59 PM
Awesome awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww yeah he is back bigsmile drinker

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 04/18/08 04:45 AM
(((Robert))) I loved it! happy drinker flowerforyou

no photo
Fri 04/18/08 06:54 AM
Wonderful!flowerforyou flowerforyou

Puffins1958's photo
Fri 04/18/08 07:14 AM
Robert...

It is sooooo good to have you back friend

I LOVED it!!!!

:heart: flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Fri 04/18/08 07:29 AM
Thanks to everyone...it does feel good to be able to express myself again. To be able to get that flow and story going feels good. Thanks for your kind comments...

Erica....thanks sweetie...
KC...Glad you liked it as well. How does it have you thinking?
Kristi...lol...you know how to make someone smile
Susan...(((HUGS))) back at ya..
cmeasiam...glad you liked it too...
Last but not least...Jo, you just don't know how good it feels to be back. I've been writing up a storm here lately. Love you all.

LAMom's photo
Fri 04/18/08 08:20 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh Robert,, Your Oz Ohhhhhhhhhhh gosh I've been there,,, Priceless,,, Simply Priceless,, :heart: flowerforyou

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